Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This mono-rhyme, My Name is Roy, uses five lines to let us know how easy it is to be entertained and in control of one's time and emotions. (Perhaps deeper than intended)

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2018

I apprecjate your comments, Bill. Thank you.

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is cute. I like the artwork, the flow, and the way it rhymes so well. You did a fine job with this well written little poem. I enjoyed reading this. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018

Thank you for your great comments

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Well, I adore Roy's pic. He's a looker, for certain. And he knows his mind. I like that in a young man.

I've never heard of Roy's favorite toy, but I'm certain many people have never heard of "Barrel of Monkeys" either.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for your comments.

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Exceptional

Author you have very good rhythm and rhyme. And little Roy has a peculiar look on his face complimented by the bright yellow background. I love it. Very good presentation and combination of poem and art.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018

Thanks again for the great review and super six. Blessings Jen.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello roy
You sound like a very happy boy who find such joy in your toy ( a game Ship Ahoy
and how it fills your day without any ploy.
Gert

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018

Many thanks for reviewing

reply by Gert sherwood on 12-Mar-2018

You are welcome jenintorre
Gert

Comment from moonsunrise

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading your delightful mono-rhyme poem. the visual is super cute and now thanks to you I know what a mono-rhyme poem is.
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018

Many thanks. I didn't know what a mono-rhyme is either but I love the challenge of trying new styles of writing,

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Sweet words, just one word needs a slight alteration (it's), a fun mono-rhyme and I wish you luck with the contest, children do love their favourite toy don't they, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018

Thanks Dolly for spotting the typo. I appreciate it. X

Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

Cute little children's poem. The only correction is that at the end of the second line you have a period, where a comma would do; and then the third line is not capitalized if you do want to keep the period. Good job with the mono poem, you fulfilled the requirements well.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018

Thanks for reading and reviewing and also spotting the mistakes. I appreciare it.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Mono-Rhyme writing prompt.
A peppy little verse, nicely rhymed, about little boy, Roy.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

Many thanks.

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Love the visual goes perfect with Roy the little boy. The mono rhyming is also perfect. Very nicely done! Good and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018

Thanks for your great comments.

reply by Sherman541 on 10-Mar-2018

You are very welcome :)