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Heavy Burdens

When all seems hopeless, I pray God hears my plea.

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Comment from udallsc
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The poem really reflects that feeling of despair when we need some confirmation, a renewed spiritual connection with the Almighty. I enjoyed the line from your bio about being retired but not tired. Sometimes life gets us down and we do get tired of trying. --Stan

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Thank you for reading and your kind comments. Yes, life is unpredictable and sometimes burdensome.Need to change profile, lol, am tired.

    Blessings,
    Brigitte
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks when life is weighing down with heavy burdens, prayer to God to hear the plea is the way left for God ever care; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    You are kind to read and review. Your comments are very supportive and I appreciate them very much. I will try to accept your challenge to be a change inspirer writer.

    Blessings,
    Brigitte