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Life Aim

An Acrostic

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Comment from Joan E.
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You seamlessly included the required words in your encouraging acrostic. I relished your managing to add alliteration and your wonderful "door" metaphor. Thank you for sharing your wise philosophy and best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Joan my friend, happy to read your wonderful review and gratefully, I thank you.
Comment from Rasmine
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Hello, Mystery Writer, :)

Good poem for the contest. I wish you all the luck in the competition.

I have found one typo:
Inhale the lilac scented (lilac-scented) air, watch the beautiful dipper (Dipper because it's a proper noun) fly

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Hello Rasmine, I am glad you stopped by and like the poem; appreciate your time and the constructive review; thank you very much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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You've used your allocated words well with this Acrostic poem and given a good life lesson on how to make the most out of the Gift. Love your final line -
Mind's spacious door....
good luck in the contest.
cheers

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Pearl my friend, I am so pleased that you like the write, specially the final line; I thank you for your time and the kind review.
Comment from BeasPeas
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A good poetry form for the contest, an acrostic. It's written with positivity and encouragement. Since we can't go back--forward attitude should be our focus. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
    Hello friend, glad you stopped by; I appreciate your visit and the thoughtful review; thank you very much.
Comment from Susan Burger
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This is a very nice entry for the Use These Words Contest. I like that you went with an acrostic- a different approach than the others I have read so far. The "attitude" shared with each letter is good advise for us to all heed. This is a great use of these eight random words. Nice job! Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Hello Susan, so pleased to read your wonderful/thoughtful comments and I am encouraged with your review; thank you very much.
Comment from rama devi
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Good response to the contest challenge. I like the theme. Nature's cathedral is the best!


Exact its worth(,) being flexible



Love this line and the fine alliteration:
Amble in the assembly of fir trees


Love the imagery and medley of phonetics, especially L, P and F sounds here:

Inhale the lilac scented air, watch the beautiful dipper fly
Mind's spacious door has the faculty to face any challenge

Love the closing line. Is the extra space before spacious intentional? It looks like a typo...suggest removing it.
I enjoyed the overall tone of this. Uplifting!


Good luck in the contest.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Deviji namaskar and thank you so much; as always, I feel that comfort after your thoughtful reviews for which I am indebted to you; gratefully, I appreciate your time and the constructive comments; thank you.
reply by rama devi on 10-Mar-2018
    Thanks for your super gracious response, dear friend. Namaskar!
    rd
Comment from Pamusart
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Creative entry for the acrostic contest. I counted things and double checked and everything is good about this entry. The poem flowed easily and conveyed its message with skill. Basically, smell the roses and lilacs and face life with confidence and an open mind. Good luck in the contest. Thank you fir sharing

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Hello Pam, I am so pleased to read your wonderful review and highly encouraged as well, thank you very much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The key word in your poem is 'flexible', if we could all be more flexible in life our walks through it would be easily and more soothing. A thoughtful acrostic and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    Dolly my friend, I am glad you like the write, I appreciate your visit and the thoughtful, helping review; thank you very much.
Comment from MissMerri
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What a clever way you have used these required words! I'm impressed you were able to make this an acrostic, keeping faithfully to the theme and fitting in each word so neatly. Excellent job! Best wishes for many votes in this contest. MM

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 10-Mar-2018
    MM my friend, I am delighted to read your wonderful comments; so pleased you stopped by, I am honored, thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks attitude towards living aim and achievement of it making mind to face any challenge on way considering life is a gift; well written, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018
    Hello my friend, I appreciate your visit and am glad that you like the write; thank you very much and have a wonderful weekend.