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Bless Me Father, For I Have Sinned

Contest Entry: My First Fumbled Kiss

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Comment from BermyBye50
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A very creative and well crafted poem describing an awkward first kiss and its consequence.

An excellent entry for this contest.

Well done.

All the best

Eugene

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 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018
    Hello Eugene!

    This poem was really enjoyable to pen!
    Thank you!