Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hello davisr (Rhonda)
I just love reading your exciting Fantasy Fiction which are so filled with mystical creatures such as your two flying horses and to see what you have in store for your adventures with
Nara and Old Buck
Gert

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thank you, Gert!
I appreciate the six stars, the review, and the wonderful comments. Thanks for taking the time.
Rhonda

reply by Gert sherwood on 07-Mar-2018

You are welcome Ronda
Gert

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

What a cute and well-written story. You put in the unexpected when you presented a flying horse. I loved it and will look forward to reading more of this story.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thank you for the wonderful review, my friend.
I've been warning people that the story was about to get more fantasy. I had to set the scene and develop characters first.

Take care,
Rhonda

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

This is decidedly weird. I had no idea something like this was coming. Flying horses and six-legged wampus cats! Riley's stories weren't so far-fetched after all.

What made the guys think Nara could ride off at Lightning's top speed and not fall off? They knew he was a magic horse, a pegasus? I'm getting very confused, but that's easy for me. :)

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

They know much about her that even she does not know. However, she did tell them she was a good rider. They also had to take the chance. They had a good idea who was after her.

They did know he was a Pegasus. More will come out later.

The story is fantasy, and has had fantasy creatures in it all along, it's just taken a turn more that direction now.

Thanks for reading and commenting!
Rhonda

Comment from Zue65

Excellent

What a fantastic story, magical and full of adventure. This post ended of course with a clue as to what events will take place for Nara in the next post. This will arouse the curiosity of the readers for sure. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

thank you, Nassus, for taking the time to read and review, my friend! You are appreciated,
Rhonda

Comment from Roxanna Andrews

Excellent

Oh my, I was not expecting that at all. The horse being a winged creature. This is really getting interesting now. Nara is a brave girl as I would have been too terrified to speak or think. Looking forward to more. Roxanna

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thank you, again, Roxanna. I appreciate you reading both chapters. How very sweet.
Yes, Nara is finding she's much stronger than she thought. Built up anger isn't a bad motivator for bravery, either.
The Pegasus horse was well cloaked!

Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Rhonda

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how you made Nara such a strong and brave female character. Now we've entered into a mystical / fantasy part of the story and it seems to get very unpredictable.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2018

Thank you for the wonderful review, my friend! Yes, it has taken a turn into deeper fantasy. The rest was about character development, and a bit of contrast.

I'm glad you like the strong character of Nara. She has more inside than she ever knew.

Thanks for reading and reviewing,
Rhonda

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

Oh my Goodness, do you ever have me hooked on this one. I really loved this post. It is one of your very best writing I have ever read. Wonderful write. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018

Oh wow, thank you so much. You've made my night!
I appreciate the six stars, and even more, the comments. I kind of held my breath on this one when posting. It was "outside the box", even if I had been building up to it.

Thank you again and again,
Rhonda

Comment from MelB

Exceptional

Hi Rhonda, the description and imagery in this chapter is fantastic! A great battle taking place between the two of them on their horses. I felt like I was living it out in slow motion.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018

Awww, thank you. The stars are brilliantly lighting up my night sky, and your comments are so helpful.
I really tried to slow down the action because I have a habit of just dumping information. It's nice to know it worked.

Thank you ever so much,
Rhonda

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What an excellent episode depicting an aerial battle between two mythical creatures, a man dressed in Crimson apparel on a black winged horse and Nara, mounted on a white Pegasus winged horse, trying to evade them, but not quite succeeding. Pegasus is wounded and Nara is captured by the rider of the black horse. Great episode Rhonda, great battle description, well done, good job, blessings, Roy Ps. What's happened to Fez?

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018

Thank you so much, Roy.

Fez has been very busy lately. He reviewed one of my chapters, but hasn't reviewed since then. He does contact me on Face Book now and then.

His daughter from a previous marriage is going to go live with him. She came to visit, and he was busy with her, and now busy getting a space for her to stay.

He's also working on getting his book published.

Take care,
Rhonda

reply by royowen on 06-Mar-2018

That good for Fez

reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018

Yeah, I'm happy he's managed to reconnect with his family. He said his daughter hunted him down on the internet (in a good way).

reply by royowen on 07-Mar-2018

That's great,

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine chapter, Rhonda--and an excellent flying horse tail--err--tale--woo, huh? I'm clever like that, I just can't help it--don't hate me because I'm clever--for arrogant bluster, yes, but...lol!

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018

You are a very funny guy! Clever and resourceful (guessing on that one).
Thanks for the review!

Rhonda

reply by Mike Stevens on 06-Mar-2018

Well, thank you, Rhonda!