Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This Irish quatrain, I Be Irish, uses the correct rhyme scheme and provides four stanzas which include lots of topics Isee as strictly of Irish origin. Neat.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2018

Thank you for reviewing, It does sound like you enjoyed it and I am glad. Your kind comments mean so much.

Comment from Mary Hollingsworth

Excellent

This writing truly should have gotten a 20 it brings in the Irish atmosphere, the lango is of the leprechaun and the Irish people, the green frog is a good selection to drive home the heart of the theme of the contest I love it sets the leprechaun and Irish atmosphere thanks for sharing in my book you want it

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for reviewing, I really appreciate your kind comments.

Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

Good art with a good poem. All do become Irish on St. Paddies day. It seems you've pointed out a lot of the things that shout "I'm Irish" and I enjoyed your poetry.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2018

Thank you for your wonderful review, I truly appreciate your kind words and am so glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Irish Quatrain and written with great fun in mind. It seems the frog is an Irish princess hoping for a Prince to pass by and make her his princess.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2018

Thank you so much for taking the time to review, I am glad you enjoyed it and I truly appreciate your kind comments.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the An Irish Quatrain Poem writing prompt.
You have done a good job of describing the Irish in your well rhymed verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you for reviewing, for your great comments and good luck wishes.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

What a charming poem. I totally enjoyed it. I think that your photo and green background set the uplifting mood. My only suggestion would be to work on a couple of the rhymes. For instance, you could say a face full of smiles. For the other one you could say
The Blarney Stone I've kissed. ..
Goode olde Ireland
By so many missed

Hope you win the competition. It's a cute poem.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you for reviewing and your kind and suggestive comments and of course the good luck wishes.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

All written with an irish accent! A clever and witty poem filled with fun and I enjoyed it, I wish you luck with the contest, loving the green St Patrick's day, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you for reviewing, your kind and clever comments and of course the good luck wishes.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I see you have developed a good Quatrain with this Irish theme. You've done a fun, and good job with this and I think you have a good entry for the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you for reviewing, your kind and thoughtful comments and of course the good luck wishes.

Comment from Katie Solis

Good

I appreciate the Irishness of your poem. The last stanza has a great rhyme, and was cheeky. The first three stanzas, smile and miles don't rhyme (smile and mile do); stone/ home and trick Patrick feels forced. I like the content of your poem, and all the different aspects you incorporated into your work.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you for reviewing and your constructive comments, I will see what I can do if there is time to change. Again thanks.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you for sharing your Irish Quatrain for the competition. You hit on all the traditional sayings and accounts of the day the Irish kiss the blarney stone.

A few of your rhymes were near rhymes which threw the rhythm off a bit for me.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018

Thank you for reviewing and for your kind comments and good luck wishes. It was my first attempt at a quatrain, so if I need to fix please let me know, thanks.