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apky
The indomitable Mrs Armstrong! I'm beginning to like her very much.
In this chapter/post, she has taught me a few things I didn't know, in the narrative/dialogue below:
"Unfortunately, males do have a period of menopause, during which these things can happen and a lot of them do. Females on the other hand from puberty deal with breasts and periods, raging hormones during both pregnancies and their monthly curse, as it is called. And then they suffer through menopause. They have decreased periods until they stop altogether, devastating hot flashes that can happen at any time. They tend to gain weight. Look at me, I used to be as thin as a popsicle stick and now I am a pleasingly plump grandma."
You have a wonderful way with descriptions and your dialogue ring true. An excellent read once again.
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2018
Thank you once again for reading and reviewing. I am glad that readers are learning a little something as they read. I appreciate your kind comments.
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