She Rescued Me
The dog had no home and was wandering6 total reviews
Comment from For better for verse
Great little story with good rhyme and a nice happy ending, great contest entry so I wish you good luck.
What an endearing picture of an Airedale too.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
Great little story with good rhyme and a nice happy ending, great contest entry so I wish you good luck.
What an endearing picture of an Airedale too.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the read and your review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Become The Animal contest.
Your life as an abandoned pup who is found is well portrayed in your well rhymed verse.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
This is a good entry for the Become The Animal contest.
Your life as an abandoned pup who is found is well portrayed in your well rhymed verse.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thank you for your read and your comments.
Comment from SLMorrical
This was so cute I just loved it. It is wonderful when someone rescues a dog and they do become a companion and protector. Very well written and to the point.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
This was so cute I just loved it. It is wonderful when someone rescues a dog and they do become a companion and protector. Very well written and to the point.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thanks much for your read and your kind words.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written contest entry for the Become the Animal! contest. It made me smile as I read it! Very cute words and love the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
This is a very well written contest entry for the Become the Animal! contest. It made me smile as I read it! Very cute words and love the imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thanks much for your read and your kind words.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This brought a tear to my eye and I have a a good friend who gave a home to a stray dog in Portugal and now the dog is happy and contented, an uplifting write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
This brought a tear to my eye and I have a a good friend who gave a home to a stray dog in Portugal and now the dog is happy and contented, an uplifting write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind words, Dolly.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you so much for sharing your entry in the 'Become the Author' contest. You did a good job of showing the emotions of the dog who only wanted to be loved. I'm glad the story went on to tell us that many years later, he still lay at the foot of her bed. Your rhyming pattern and rhythm could be felt throughout the piece.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
Dear Anonymous Poet;
Thank you so much for sharing your entry in the 'Become the Author' contest. You did a good job of showing the emotions of the dog who only wanted to be loved. I'm glad the story went on to tell us that many years later, he still lay at the foot of her bed. Your rhyming pattern and rhythm could be felt throughout the piece.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thanks so much for you read and your kind words.