The Housewife
A housewife prepares dinner15 total reviews
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yep a career that was almost given to us a birth especially when we become wives and mothers. It becomes a way of life which is not so glamerous after years into it. Every now and then we'll find a Mr. Mom and he saves the day. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Yep a career that was almost given to us a birth especially when we become wives and mothers. It becomes a way of life which is not so glamerous after years into it. Every now and then we'll find a Mr. Mom and he saves the day. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Nary for your lovely review and five star rating
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Yep my pleasure
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem about a career, The Housewife, reminds the reader that caring for a home and family can best be done by dedicated day-on-stay-on personnel.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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This poem about a career, The Housewife, reminds the reader that caring for a home and family can best be done by dedicated day-on-stay-on personnel.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Bill for your thoughtful review and five star rating
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Pam. Another cool write from you. I like the idea of reaching up for a tupperware bowl. To have your thoughts fall out well that too is Kinda cool. I always thought tupperware was a good idea to put dinner suggestions in and draw out a week's worth to put a menu together ... hahahahaah wonderful! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Hi Pam. Another cool write from you. I like the idea of reaching up for a tupperware bowl. To have your thoughts fall out well that too is Kinda cool. I always thought tupperware was a good idea to put dinner suggestions in and draw out a week's worth to put a menu together ... hahahahaah wonderful! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 04-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Kiwi for your nice review and rating. Funny idea about the recipes
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author I see the humor of a house wife making her career happier by when she getting ready to make dinner takes
tupperware bowl.
shake it upside down.
All my thoughts fall out
And play in the kitchen
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Hello author I see the humor of a house wife making her career happier by when she getting ready to make dinner takes
tupperware bowl.
shake it upside down.
All my thoughts fall out
And play in the kitchen
Gert
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Gert for your nice review and rating
Comment from cailinraine8
Pleasant bit of humour, nice to find a smile on my face. What an enchanting thought... we all spawn thought, women give birth to babies and what joy to find them playing together! Nice work.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Pleasant bit of humour, nice to find a smile on my face. What an enchanting thought... we all spawn thought, women give birth to babies and what joy to find them playing together! Nice work.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, cailinraine8 for your nice review and rating
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site satisfies your goals for membership.
I am guessing that your poem is somewhat autobiographical. If not, you took on a strong persona. Thank you for seeing housewifery as a career and also the humor in it. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site satisfies your goals for membership.
I am guessing that your poem is somewhat autobiographical. If not, you took on a strong persona. Thank you for seeing housewifery as a career and also the humor in it. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Joan for your nice review and rating and luck! I have never been housewife, but, my mother was
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Ah--she was a good role model! Smiles- Joan
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Career Poetry contest.
Your fun verse about being a housewife is well written.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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This is a good entry for the Career Poetry contest.
Your fun verse about being a housewife is well written.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Sharon for another nice review and rating and good luck wishes!
Comment from donette1914
very cute poem of a career as a homemaker and having fun while doing it. very creative i love the art work and this is a wonderful poem well done it was a pleasure and i hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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very cute poem of a career as a homemaker and having fun while doing it. very creative i love the art work and this is a wonderful poem well done it was a pleasure and i hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, donette1914 for wishing me luck in the contest. Thank you for your nice review and rating
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces a Chef's hassle free preparation of dinner.
The work humorously highlights the Chef's short cut to getting dinner ready.
The work constitutes a significant commentary that approximates the functional perspective of the proverbial untrained cook who merely dusted her palms into the pot as a way of adding salt, because she never saw when her mother collected salt from the container.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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The work reminisces a Chef's hassle free preparation of dinner.
The work humorously highlights the Chef's short cut to getting dinner ready.
The work constitutes a significant commentary that approximates the functional perspective of the proverbial untrained cook who merely dusted her palms into the pot as a way of adding salt, because she never saw when her mother collected salt from the container.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Lloyd for your great review and rating
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Debbie Pope
What an interesting poem and photo. I can just see you preparing dinner, as your thoughts roam to more interesting topics. When I cook, I want no one around. My mind does flit around as I prepare the food. I usually have a glass of wine and a fine time of it. It's nice to make something pleasant out of drudgery. Your poem says all of this to me--in a quirky, creative way. I love it.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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What an interesting poem and photo. I can just see you preparing dinner, as your thoughts roam to more interesting topics. When I cook, I want no one around. My mind does flit around as I prepare the food. I usually have a glass of wine and a fine time of it. It's nice to make something pleasant out of drudgery. Your poem says all of this to me--in a quirky, creative way. I love it.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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Thank you, Debbie for your nice review and rating. I think we all daydream when performing mundane tasks
