It Pays to Be Lovely
Beauty saved Snow White's keister.6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 movie review, It Pays to be Lovely, has the correct syllable count and seems to suggest that an ugly Snow White would be a rotting corpse a the end of the story. Hmmm?
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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This 5-7-5 movie review, It Pays to be Lovely, has the correct syllable count and seems to suggest that an ugly Snow White would be a rotting corpse a the end of the story. Hmmm?
Comment Written 03-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018
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No such suggestion. If Snow had been an ugly girl, there would have been no story. No jealousy. No poison. No silly dwarves needed. No prince falling in love with her. I don't know how you dug up that rotting corpse, Bill.
Thanks for verifying the syllable count.
Comment from nartoonla
Hi, That was simple and to the point. Colorful and just right!
Indeed it pays but thank God not always...As even at a beauty contest points are given to the right girl as she masters her crown also in spoken thoughts and words.
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Hi, That was simple and to the point. Colorful and just right!
Indeed it pays but thank God not always...As even at a beauty contest points are given to the right girl as she masters her crown also in spoken thoughts and words.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
Comment from Susan Burger
No there really was not room to add the dwarfs in a 575! This is the gist of the movie Snow White and a good 575 for the Movie Review Contest. Since it is a children's story full of ruthless jealousy and a bit scary, they needed the dwarves to lighten things up a bit! Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
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No there really was not room to add the dwarfs in a 575! This is the gist of the movie Snow White and a good 575 for the Movie Review Contest. Since it is a children's story full of ruthless jealousy and a bit scary, they needed the dwarves to lighten things up a bit! Nice job. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2018
Comment from Wetbelly01
This is a great review, seems to me...
It will do well in the contest I would think...
Don't see any problems with it...
My compliments and Good Luck with the contest!
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This is a great review, seems to me...
It will do well in the contest I would think...
Don't see any problems with it...
My compliments and Good Luck with the contest!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
Comment from His Grayness
Very brief of course, but exceptionally well done in perfect compliance with the poetry challenge ...IMHO! I cannot offer a single thing to improve this and thank the author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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Very brief of course, but exceptionally well done in perfect compliance with the poetry challenge ...IMHO! I cannot offer a single thing to improve this and thank the author for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he,I love this, mug and dug! Great stuff, You made me smile with this one, Prince Charming and Snow White come together here in your fun write, loved it, love Dolly x
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He he he,I love this, mug and dug! Great stuff, You made me smile with this one, Prince Charming and Snow White come together here in your fun write, loved it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
