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Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, as always you do make me laugh. Your lighthearted poem are such a joy to read. It's so needed in a world so full of doom and gloom. You made my day. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Hi Bill, as always you do make me laugh. Your lighthearted poem are such a joy to read. It's so needed in a world so full of doom and gloom. You made my day. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, bless him, he was only trying to win her affections. LOL! I don't think I'd like to be a snail either. I love your funny poems, Bill, they are light and heartwarming in a world that knows only madness. Well done my friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Aww, bless him, he was only trying to win her affections. LOL! I don't think I'd like to be a snail either. I love your funny poems, Bill, they are light and heartwarming in a world that knows only madness. Well done my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
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Thanks, Sandra
Comment from nomi338
Stay in your lane, or else you're gonna feel the pain.
If she is more than four times your size, it's time for you to realize
She is not the one for you, so here is what you must do
Find yourself another love, who will love you true, true, true
If to her you resemble a treat, your whole body she might eat.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Stay in your lane, or else you're gonna feel the pain.
If she is more than four times your size, it's time for you to realize
She is not the one for you, so here is what you must do
Find yourself another love, who will love you true, true, true
If to her you resemble a treat, your whole body she might eat.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thanks to you for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
Alas, some love relationships were never meant to be. I was surprised that the daisy also spoke and had some reincarnation theories. I'm guessing you found the picture first and then wrote the poem?
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Alas, some love relationships were never meant to be. I was surprised that the daisy also spoke and had some reincarnation theories. I'm guessing you found the picture first and then wrote the poem?
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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You don't think I could find a picture to match a whale, snail, daisy, and popcorn poem?
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I couldn't even imagine typing that search.
Comment from Pamusart
Cute! I wike it. It is weally cute. The whale broke the snail's heart and vice verse. My husband goes by the nickname Rugsy. I call him that wascal wugsy. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Best of luck with it.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Cute! I wike it. It is weally cute. The whale broke the snail's heart and vice verse. My husband goes by the nickname Rugsy. I call him that wascal wugsy. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it. Best of luck with it.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Pam
Comment from Gloria ....
Hilarious story of true love. sigh. Your use of punny language is unparalleled, Bill. Whalaxing ... yes
whaley sure another great one. How do you ever think these up? It's so creative and unique.
Great job and I look forward to your next addition.
Gloria
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Hilarious story of true love. sigh. Your use of punny language is unparalleled, Bill. Whalaxing ... yes
whaley sure another great one. How do you ever think these up? It's so creative and unique.
Great job and I look forward to your next addition.
Gloria
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Gloria, for the great review. Bill
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Talk about a mismatch. How did the snail hope to please a whale. Sure, he may have been well hung, but the biggest snail would never cut it with a whale. You sure come up with some bizarre ideas. LOL! :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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LOL! Talk about a mismatch. How did the snail hope to please a whale. Sure, he may have been well hung, but the biggest snail would never cut it with a whale. You sure come up with some bizarre ideas. LOL! :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Phyllis. I was trying to use what was in the cartoon.
Comment from damommy
Such a cute poem.
Poor Sidney. He's to suffer from unrequited love. Maybe his wish will come true, and Wilma will wake up to find herself turned into a snail.
Clever working 'whale' into ordinary words. Whalaxing. lol
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Such a cute poem.
Poor Sidney. He's to suffer from unrequited love. Maybe his wish will come true, and Wilma will wake up to find herself turned into a snail.
Clever working 'whale' into ordinary words. Whalaxing. lol
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thanks, da
Comment from judiverse
Cleverly done, and very colorful. I like the use of dialogue in your poem, and the names Wilma Whale and Sidney Snail are great. They are star-crossed lovers, apparently. Poor Sidney's pick-up lines don't work. The daisy intervenes (does she come from the Bronx) and mentions they might have been married in another life. Lesson: never ever tell a whale you wish was a snail. Fun use of words in this. judi
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Cleverly done, and very colorful. I like the use of dialogue in your poem, and the names Wilma Whale and Sidney Snail are great. They are star-crossed lovers, apparently. Poor Sidney's pick-up lines don't work. The daisy intervenes (does she come from the Bronx) and mentions they might have been married in another life. Lesson: never ever tell a whale you wish was a snail. Fun use of words in this. judi
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're welcome. Have a whale of a day. judi
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The simple lesson learnt from this work is that, we should not discriminate, but rather accept everybody as one. What was the point of Sydney Snail showing so much interest in Wilma Whale only to turn round and wish that Wilma were a snail like him.
The work earns its texture through the use of rhymes imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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The simple lesson learnt from this work is that, we should not discriminate, but rather accept everybody as one. What was the point of Sydney Snail showing so much interest in Wilma Whale only to turn round and wish that Wilma were a snail like him.
The work earns its texture through the use of rhymes imagery and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Lloyd
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Keep on flourishing!
