Comment from Marge Setzer

Excellent

And the moral to the story is...a thing of beauty may only be skin deep. This is a perfect metaphor for life. Enjoy the beauty, but beware of potential pitfalls. Aesop couldn't have said it better. Marge

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018

Thanks for your comments and the stars. I appreciate both. All mushrooms are not made alike, for sure!

reply by Marge Setzer on 02-Mar-2018

You're welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It looks so beautiful and innocent, but cannot be touched or eaten, your poem is so appropriate for this contest, I wish you luck with it, dealthy words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thanks for the comments and the stars. I appreciate the feedback.

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

A good entry for the contest. I guess the haiku I submitted to the general haiku contest should have been submitted for this death contest. I just joined fanstory a few hours ago. Don't eat it! Thank you for sharing and best of luck with this poem

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

I'm a newbie of a week, maybe, so you know I appreciate your comments and stars. I think you'll love FanStory. Everyone is super nice.