My Beautiful Sister
5-7-5 poem6 total reviews
Comment from writerjen
Creative 3 line 5-7-5 syllable contest entry. Your syllable count is perfect. Good imagery and descriptive language. It's nice that you wrote this poem about your sister's beauty...hope you told her she's in one of your poems. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Creative 3 line 5-7-5 syllable contest entry. Your syllable count is perfect. Good imagery and descriptive language. It's nice that you wrote this poem about your sister's beauty...hope you told her she's in one of your poems. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the gracious review of my 5-7-5 poem about a loved one.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your sister must have been a stunningly beautiful woman, your words are a tribute to her, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Your sister must have been a stunningly beautiful woman, your words are a tribute to her, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the gracious review of my 5-7-5 poem about a loved one. She still is stunningly beautiful even as a grandmother.
Comment from Beck Fenton
Nice haiku describing a beautiful sister. I like the picture and note about your sister being mistaken for Julia. It adds to the truth of your poetry.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Nice haiku describing a beautiful sister. I like the picture and note about your sister being mistaken for Julia. It adds to the truth of your poetry.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the gracious review of my 3-line 5-7-5 poem.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poem writing prompt.
Nicely said, describing your beautiful sister.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 3 Line Poem writing prompt.
Nicely said, describing your beautiful sister.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my three line 5-7-5 poem
Comment from jenintorre
A very nice three line poem and a lovely picture of Julia Roberts. My daughter has also been
Taken for her many times. She is a great actress. I wish you luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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A very nice three line poem and a lovely picture of Julia Roberts. My daughter has also been
Taken for her many times. She is a great actress. I wish you luck in the competition.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my three line 5-7-5 poem.
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fine 5-7-5 poem that has haiku-like details. Yes, the hair frames a face. Your closing line is like the satori in a haiku. Poem also reminds me of Da Vinci's Mona Lisa.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with your creative entry.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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This is a fine 5-7-5 poem that has haiku-like details. Yes, the hair frames a face. Your closing line is like the satori in a haiku. Poem also reminds me of Da Vinci's Mona Lisa.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success with your creative entry.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my three line 5-7-5 poem.
