Comment from Susan Burger

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Contest. It definitely gave me a chuckle. This made me think of the saying "Just cause it fits, doesn't mean you should wear it." Sometimes we could wriggle into something, but that does not mean we should wear it! Nice job. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello!
Oh man!
Mystery Writer you have all the elements of a perfect 1/6/1 poem...except your second line has 7 syllables: di et be fore you wear it
Plenty of time to rewrite!

Hope this helps!
diane

Fixed! And now it's perfect...and your poem shares advice I should take! Hope you do well in the contest!

Best Wishes,
diane

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Ouch! Thanks for the heads-up, Diane, and the compliment. I appreciate your help, but am disappointed by the demerit.
The fix worked out well, and if you agree, perhaps you'll see fit to re-merit.

Not able to count to six without an advisor ,
The Not Really a Mystery Man

reply by Mrs. KT on 28-Feb-2018

I re-submitted my rating!
Please let me know if you received it and Best Wishes!
diane

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Yes, the upgrade did take. Thank you, Diane. That was very thoughtful.

reply by Mrs. KT on 28-Feb-2018

Mystery Writer,
It was my pleasure.
Hope you do well!

diane

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Me,too. Thanks again, Diane.

Comment from Linda Kay

Excellent

Perfect match for the picture, and the poem is so relatable for many of us. I feel this way especially when trying on a bathing suit is involved! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Well, that is very funny. I have to ask the question. Which came first, the drawing or the poem? I think that you did an awesome job with this contest. Puts mine to shame.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018