Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for speaking out about animal abuse. I admired your mono-verse rhymes and repeats for emphasis. The artwork you selected helped to establish the mood as well. Best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018

Thank you. Your comments are encouraging.

Comment from nartoonla

Excellent

Hi, I found you doggie story was well underlined and indeed why... Well done. Thanks for passing by again and appreciated it and cared that to be underlined.

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018

Thank you very much. I appreciate the stars.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Become the Animal' writing prompt.
This is a well told and sad story.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018

Thank you very much. I am keeping my fingers crossed. I was just notified that two of my poems were selected for publication by another literary journal. No profit yet, but a lot of pride.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness this is terrible and you need to be careful, your neighbour could threaten you too if he is this violent. Your poem is a plea to all those who beat animals, such cruelty is horrific and these people should be imprisoned for their crimes, your poem highlights this awful situation, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018

Thank you. He moved.