haiku (spring blossoms foretell)
5-7-5 for contest6 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Haiku Poetry writing contest.
Your verse has a clear story in so few words.
Well done, and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
This is a good entry for the Haiku Poetry writing contest.
Your verse has a clear story in so few words.
Well done, and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the gracious review of my haiku.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks foretelling of change in season, spring blossoms remind the coming of summer's charming bloom; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
This speaks foretelling of change in season, spring blossoms remind the coming of summer's charming bloom; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. Good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your gracious review of my haiku.
Comment from Susan Burger
This is a good entry for a Haiku contest. It is true the blossoms of spring foretell the blooms that we enjoy in the summer. This is one of the things I love about spring - anticipation. Good luck in the competition with this one!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
This is a good entry for a Haiku contest. It is true the blossoms of spring foretell the blooms that we enjoy in the summer. This is one of the things I love about spring - anticipation. Good luck in the competition with this one!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Comment from cailinraine8
Lovely!! Perfect cadence and a complete picture and thought in three lines.... I just love the way people come up with so many ideas! Love the painting!!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
Lovely!! Perfect cadence and a complete picture and thought in three lines.... I just love the way people come up with so many ideas! Love the painting!!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes 'blossoms foretell', I like those words very much and they bring forth great anticipation of summer, I wish you luck with the contest, you brought joy with these words to me, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
Yes 'blossoms foretell', I like those words very much and they bring forth great anticipation of summer, I wish you luck with the contest, you brought joy with these words to me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Comment from tfawcus
There are definitely quite a few poems coming up about Spring at the moment. It seems that you are not alone in looking forward to it with anticipation.!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
There are definitely quite a few poems coming up about Spring at the moment. It seems that you are not alone in looking forward to it with anticipation.!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your gracious review of my haiku.