Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Exceptional

This it is especially good, Ulla. There's a lot of tension and drama and then you pull it up perfectly with it all being a dream. Best of luck in the competition, Giddy

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Wow, Giddy thanks a lot and for the lovely stars. Your recognition of my writing means a lot to me. I quite enjoyed writing this flash. Hugs. Ulla:)))

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ulla, it's sad when that starts to be so common...way to much stress in people today...so very sad...very well written sweet girl...and I love your picture...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Thanks so much, Linda, fortunately it was only a bad nightmare. All best. Ulla xx

reply by l.raven on 03-Mar-2018

even they can be scary...sigh...you are soooo very welcome sweet girl...love xxoo

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Hi Ulla,

I was hoping to find the next chapter of your story. You are full of surprises :)

You have a nice contest entry for the 100 word flash fiction contest. You made me think of the sound we heard when somebody shot at our living room windows a little while back. A sound I hope to never hear again.

- "I sat up shivering in (could) sweat." - a cold sweat?

Best wishes in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2018

Thanks so very much, Joy. How glad I am that I can surprise you, but more so that you liked my little flash. I've made the correction. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction writing prompt.
Well told story with a twist.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thanks a lot Sharon. I'm so pleased you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

Wow!... What a cool piece!
I would think it will do well in the contest...
Didn't come across any problems...
My compliments and Good Luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you so much. I'm so pleased. All the best.Ulla:))

reply by Wetbelly01 on 28-Feb-2018

You're very welcome!

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

The artwork is excellent and complements your 100 word Flash Fiction very well. I find it well written, especially the unexpected end: another nightmare. Best wishes for the contest I wondered if it is you Susan/Realist.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you so much, Robina. I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sre what mean if I'm Susan/ Realist. I'm Ulla:))

Comment from APyburn-Phifer

Excellent

"A Walk in the Woods" quickly grabbed and held my attention; then the dream was over. I was ready to pull up my blanket, have a glass of wine and read further. Very much enjoyed A Walk in the Woods.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thank you so very much. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from jack silver

Exceptional

We came to a halt, our ears tune(don't need the (d) in(,) to where the sound had come from.

I sat upright shivering in (cold) sweat. "Oh, no, not another nightmare."

Hope this helps. These where the only thing I noticed! Well done!

From
Jack

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Wow, jack. Thank you so much for this great recognition. I'm looking into the suggestions you're making. All the best. Ulla:))

reply by jack silver on 28-Feb-2018

no problemo

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Well, when someone shoots a gun and coming out of the woods pointing the weapon at you, it might be best to hope it's a dream. Or, that they are a bad shot, and your feet don't fail to carry your butt in a hurry. Thanks for sharing. :-)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Hahahha, Ric, you make me laugh.Thanks a lot for some great comments. All the best.Ulla:)))

reply by Ric Myworld on 01-Mar-2018

If my silliness can put a smile on just one face a day, then, I'm happy! :-)

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Oh, you do put a smile on my face for sure. :))

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Very nice job with this 100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry. I have tried writing one of these, but only using 100 words is nut in my nature. This is very clever and I sincerely wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thanks so much, Sasha, As always it's so appreciated. Warm regards. Ulla:)))