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A 2-part story of a young girl named Betty
2 total reviews
Comment from
Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about humane scream; Lloyd cried not for himself but for those folks who endured the suffering for the fortitude of the Prairie men; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
Thank you so much for your kind review. I have one last chapter I will post today. I appreciate your feedback and really welcome ANY constructive criticism from those that are the real professionals.
Comment from
Wetbelly01
Aww, now you went and got me all chokey and teary!
Two thumbs up... for this piece!
Didn't come across any 'glitches' along the way...
My compliments... Well Done!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
Sorry WB, I can get chokey and teary too. This book is taking me to places I never knew I could go, let alone write about. It controls me. I am going to post the last chapter in a few minutes and would love to have you tell me what you think.
reply by Wetbelly01 on 24-Feb-2018
I'm very honored to do so!
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