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Chasin' dreams

Hope they come true

6 total reviews 
Comment from l.raven
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HI Waves, I do have dreams I wish they would all come true...not that some haven't...but I have just a few more that I would like to see before my time...I love your poem my sweet friend...always...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2018
    Thanks again Linda much appreciated as always

    xxdip
reply by l.raven on 02-Mar-2018
    so welcome Waves...feels good to be back home...love xxoo
Comment from Heather Knight
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Yes, you are right and I think I have told you before. I think dreams are super important. I like the optimism of your poem. Thanks for sharing your positive attitude.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thank you Maria always appreciate your comments and reviews

    dip
Comment from Pantygynt
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"If you don' have a dream,
How you gonna have a dream come true?"

In this short poem you are echoing the words of that number "Happy Talk" from the Rodgers and Hammerstein musical "South Pacific. You are so full of dreams, Dip, that I am sure one will shortly come true, if it hasn't happened already.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thankyou you Panty and may all your dreams come true as well

    dip
Comment from closetpoetjester
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I have a dream to follow. That's why I'm not here at the moment haha
Love that you're chasin' your dreams Toits. Pursue them with gusto.

Not not gutso LOL

Short, sweet and nicely rhymed.

Well done

PX

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Short and sweet..just like me snookems lol
    I hope you dream is coming to perfect fruition

    Thanks for stopping by and catching me and Thanks for the 6

    xxdip
Comment from c_lucas
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Dreams are the subconscious' way of communicating with the conscious. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thanks again c for going to the trouble of reviewing I really appreciate your comments

    dip
reply by c_lucas on 24-Feb-2018
    You're welcome.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
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Very nice indeed. I really enjoyed this poem very much. I love my dreams too.I always try to remember them when I wake. Thanks again for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings. Thanks again.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much Trudi, your positive review is much appreciated.

    dip