Similes and Metaphors
A couple of poetic tools5 total reviews
Comment from sandy montgomery
I like thos irreverent poem you have written. It definitely speaks of who you are and your personal style. The best thing about your writing is the authenticity you bring. You are who you are...you write what you write. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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I like thos irreverent poem you have written. It definitely speaks of who you are and your personal style. The best thing about your writing is the authenticity you bring. You are who you are...you write what you write. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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That is the biggest compliment anyone could give Thank you so much Sandy.
dip
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, I don't care how you write...metaphors or not...I love your poetry...so make me cry...some make me laugh...but either way...I feel what comes from your heart...I hope all is well with you...love your poem...so very well written my sweet friend...miss ya...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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HI Waves, I don't care how you write...metaphors or not...I love your poetry...so make me cry...some make me laugh...but either way...I feel what comes from your heart...I hope all is well with you...love your poem...so very well written my sweet friend...miss ya...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you again Linda. I love it that you love my poetry you are my biggest and most loyal fan and I sincerely appreciate that
dip
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you are always sooooooo welcome...I know talent when I read it...sweet dreams...xxoo love
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is a very well written rhyming poem about how you perceive poetry and writing it. Very good wording and great imagery as I see you sitting, pondering and letting your pin and ink fly! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Dip, This is a very well written rhyming poem about how you perceive poetry and writing it. Very good wording and great imagery as I see you sitting, pondering and letting your pin and ink fly! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thankyou as always Teri
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
You are a disobedient bum, can't follow regulations
refuse to write in metaphors and other stipulations.
And yet your verse is seldom free you jog along in rhyme
and sometimes manage metre too but you cant do that all of the time. (Lol)
You say your work comes from the heart, you need a cardiac specialist
there's definetely a murmur there. I can spot the beat you missed.
You write a lot of love - your wife says your not romantic
You write a lot of surfing and such aquatic antics
You write about Corulla your hometown in Australia
and we keep on reviewing coz we do not want to fail ya.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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You are a disobedient bum, can't follow regulations
refuse to write in metaphors and other stipulations.
And yet your verse is seldom free you jog along in rhyme
and sometimes manage metre too but you cant do that all of the time. (Lol)
You say your work comes from the heart, you need a cardiac specialist
there's definetely a murmur there. I can spot the beat you missed.
You write a lot of love - your wife says your not romantic
You write a lot of surfing and such aquatic antics
You write about Corulla your hometown in Australia
and we keep on reviewing coz we do not want to fail ya.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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haha very good Panty. I always enjoy your attempt at rhyme and bad spellcheck lol
thanks as always
dipster
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I was emulating a certain Australian of my acquaintance.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A delightful read Dip and your words spill out from your heart and are a joy, pulling those heartstrings is an art, don't ever stop, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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A delightful read Dip and your words spill out from your heart and are a joy, pulling those heartstrings is an art, don't ever stop, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thanks as always Dolly hope everything is well with you. Just thought I'd post a couple while I have the chance Things are starting to get really busy in my life. I have a new project and fanstory has to play second fiddle.
dip
