Comment from sunao

Excellent

Thank you so much for writing this. An angel really sleeps below. I think that the image and the coloring of the background of the poem were appropriate. Please keep up the good work and have a lovely day!!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018

You too my see dear...
Dr Ricky 1024.
Later today

Comment from Henry King

Excellent

Review by Henry: Many may not see the sibilance while reading this excellent piece of work. You must speak it out loud to get the full beauty of the words you have written. There is much more than a glimmer ahead, when you have us in dream ships exploring the heavens. Thank you.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

thanks again Henry and we're all truly drifting throughout Heaven's Delight in our Dream ships trying to get back home where we once were talk to Ricky 10:24 and have a blessed day

reply by Henry King on 22-Feb-2018

Reply by Henry: You are very welcome.

Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

I believe this is my favorite work that I have read authored by you. I love the imagery of the chariot. When I see one of your works, there are usually quotations at the beginning of each line, and it is a bit distracting. Overall this was a moving, emotive piece. Great job.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thanks for this Katie doctor Ricky 10:20 for another blessed day

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and nicely written poem you have penned. You used such great descriptive words and talked about the angels. I saw one thing I need to ask you about:
"Beautiful Bluen Eyes...
did you mean (blue) eyes?

Great job my friend! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Sometimes I make up or add to the word blue I added it and made it blue in eyes and mean that the eyes are a deeper blue thanks for the review Terry doctor at 10:24 and have a blessed day

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Isn't that the truth, children are such beautiful angels when they are asleep and watching them, knowing their innocence, makes them that much more angelic. Grandchildren are the best! Sherman541

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thanks Sherman I don't write or read too often when it comes to the Jays to Alex and I write mainly about my son cuz he passed away but thanks for your time here and have a blessed day talk to Ricky 1024

reply by Sherman541 on 22-Feb-2018

You are most welcome and You have a blessed day too :)

reply by Sherman541 on 22-Feb-2018

You are most welcome and You have a blessed day too :)

reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

reply by Sherman541 on 22-Feb-2018

:)

Comment from Trudi Perkins

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. Your poem delivered that for me.Thanks again for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thanks Trudi and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how grandpa is proud of his grandson an Angel is so peaceful and blessed with Grace as he sleeps; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018

Thanks Alcreator and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today