God sees me as I am...
Without a mask.60 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
So sorry your having a difficult time Roy. We seem to have these trials in our lives. I've come to understand what my mother used to say. God is enough and many times I have had to remind myself of that.
this is a beautiful poem of faith knowing that god does see us as we are without a mask.
Very well done my friend.
Blessings
janet
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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So sorry your having a difficult time Roy. We seem to have these trials in our lives. I've come to understand what my mother used to say. God is enough and many times I have had to remind myself of that.
this is a beautiful poem of faith knowing that god does see us as we are without a mask.
Very well done my friend.
Blessings
janet
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thanks dear dear Janet, for your compassion and empathetic review and special, stars, I'll be fine, bless you Roy
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, God Sees Me As I Am, seems to follow the current loss of young lives and our inability, perhaps, at first, to find any possible forgiveness in our hearts for the shooter. It's only by knowing that we are all forgiven by grace that we could even imagine offering that knowledge to one so vile.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This poem, God Sees Me As I Am, seems to follow the current loss of young lives and our inability, perhaps, at first, to find any possible forgiveness in our hearts for the shooter. It's only by knowing that we are all forgiven by grace that we could even imagine offering that knowledge to one so vile.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Bil for these most perceptive comments and intuitive review, blessings, Roy
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Very nicely done from a religious perspective and would appeal to a modern audience, I would think. Oftentimes, I do not review religious poetry, but I liked this very much and the photo chosen to go with it. Meshes. Meaningful. Very nice.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Very nicely done from a religious perspective and would appeal to a modern audience, I would think. Oftentimes, I do not review religious poetry, but I liked this very much and the photo chosen to go with it. Meshes. Meaningful. Very nice.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Wendy, for these most empathetic comments and sympathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautiful piece of spiritual poetry dear Roy! I think you have done such a brilliant poem that it shines as brightly like the night sky's stars.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is a beautiful piece of spiritual poetry dear Roy! I think you have done such a brilliant poem that it shines as brightly like the night sky's stars.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you again Dear Rebecca, for these most lovely comments and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from robina1978
Lovely photo of a father and his two children. God sees you naked and without a mask. He loves you as you are, His dearest child, His special lamb. God gives his love without regret.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Lovely photo of a father and his two children. God sees you naked and without a mask. He loves you as you are, His dearest child, His special lamb. God gives his love without regret.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Ine for these most lovely comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from friartuck
I know where you go - been there myself - a lot! Thanks for a very nice reminder about it! The meter might use a little bit of tweaking, but overall it's very nicely done! 'Thanks again!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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I know where you go - been there myself - a lot! Thanks for a very nice reminder about it! The meter might use a little bit of tweaking, but overall it's very nicely done! 'Thanks again!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you, for these most empathetic comments and a great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a poem of faith and I hope that faith helped you through the trials of the last two days and is still helping you. This shows God's love as it is. Unconditional. Like a parent's love for a child. Which we are.
The poem has a smooth meter and no rhymes seemed forced.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is a poem of faith and I hope that faith helped you through the trials of the last two days and is still helping you. This shows God's love as it is. Unconditional. Like a parent's love for a child. Which we are.
The poem has a smooth meter and no rhymes seemed forced.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Joan, for these most empathetic comments and a great review, blessings, Roy
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You're welcome, Roy. Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm sorry you are having a bad time, Roy, life is like that at times, but the one person we can count on one hundred percent, is God. Your poem is so nice, it reminds us all that He is always watching over us. Your author's notes says it all. Big hugs, my dear friend. I hope your trials disappear soon. Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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I'm sorry you are having a bad time, Roy, life is like that at times, but the one person we can count on one hundred percent, is God. Your poem is so nice, it reminds us all that He is always watching over us. Your author's notes says it all. Big hugs, my dear friend. I hope your trials disappear soon. Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sandra, for these most lovely comments and a sympathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Aussie
Yes, He is our refuge and our strength. We may be laughed at for our belief, but we know to turn the other cheek. Nicely written my friend.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Yes, He is our refuge and our strength. We may be laughed at for our belief, but we know to turn the other cheek. Nicely written my friend.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank again Kay, for these most marvellous comments and a review, blessings, Roy
Comment from MelB
Hi Roy, very nice rhyme and flow. God does refresh and renew us. Rejection is something I'm finding grows stronger as the walk to God gets closer. It's interesting how that happens.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Hi Roy, very nice rhyme and flow. God does refresh and renew us. Rejection is something I'm finding grows stronger as the walk to God gets closer. It's interesting how that happens.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank again Mel, for these most empathetic comments and a great review, blessings, Roy
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You're most welcome.
