God sees me as I am...
Without a mask.60 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Roy,
This is a fine poem with an interesting group of rhymes
I like the variation and variety of words used
An excellent message, too.
I hope you are doing alright
The best one can do is to be themselves
Best wishes to you
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Hello Roy,
This is a fine poem with an interesting group of rhymes
I like the variation and variety of words used
An excellent message, too.
I hope you are doing alright
The best one can do is to be themselves
Best wishes to you
Robert
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thanks Robert, for these most encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from cailinraine8
Very well written, I enjoyed this. I think that perhaps a lot of introverts can really relate to these thoughts expressed eloquently. Is it not a wonderful gift to partake in the writing of others, especially poetry which is a window into our souls? Thank you.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Very well written, I enjoyed this. I think that perhaps a lot of introverts can really relate to these thoughts expressed eloquently. Is it not a wonderful gift to partake in the writing of others, especially poetry which is a window into our souls? Thank you.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thanks My friend , for Uplifting words and marvellous review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Roy, How lovely you put it in this writing - God loves us despite our faults. You have worded it beautifully, personalised, in good aabb rhyme. Your first stanza is so lovely it could stand alone -
God sees me naked and exposed,
without a mask as my abode.
And yet He loves me as I am,
His dearest child, His special lamb. .... Lovely as always - Dorothy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Hi Roy, How lovely you put it in this writing - God loves us despite our faults. You have worded it beautifully, personalised, in good aabb rhyme. Your first stanza is so lovely it could stand alone -
God sees me naked and exposed,
without a mask as my abode.
And yet He loves me as I am,
His dearest child, His special lamb. .... Lovely as always - Dorothy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
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Thanks, for these excellent words and a super review, blessings, Roy
Comment from tfawcus
There are times when the world seems set against us and I'm sorry to hear that you've been going through a bad patch, Roy. You poem is a fine expression of your faith in God and the comfort you receive from knowing that he is unconditionally accepting of us as we are.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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There are times when the world seems set against us and I'm sorry to hear that you've been going through a bad patch, Roy. You poem is a fine expression of your faith in God and the comfort you receive from knowing that he is unconditionally accepting of us as we are.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thanks again Tony, for these most welcome comments, blesings, Roy
Comment from Sugarray77
Well done with the construction of the fine verse. I love the proclamation of "he loves me as I am", what a great God we serve. Thanks for the author's notes too. Very encouraging.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Well done with the construction of the fine verse. I love the proclamation of "he loves me as I am", what a great God we serve. Thanks for the author's notes too. Very encouraging.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thanks, , for these most empathetic comments and a great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from c_lucas
Follow Jesus and be blessed by His promises. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. This has very smooth imagery.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Follow Jesus and be blessed by His promises. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. This has very smooth imagery.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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Thank again Charlie , for these great comments great review, blessings, Roy
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You're welcome, Roy. Charlie
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
It sounds like you are having a difficult time. This is such a comforting verse to rely on in such times. I hope things are looking up for you. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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It sounds like you are having a difficult time. This is such a comforting verse to rely on in such times. I hope things are looking up for you. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank again Jack, for these most empathetic comments and a great review, I'm fine Debbie, blessings, Roy
Comment from Sis Cat
You write among the finest poems of faith on FanStory. You speak from experience, weaving it into a prayer, a praise, a sermon:
Which one of you can love his foe,
and with that love stem taunting's flow.
His love He gives without regret,
because in Him love's shadow's set.
The rhymes support your core message but does not overwhelm it. I feel your gratitude and resilience during your trying days. I pray they get better. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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You write among the finest poems of faith on FanStory. You speak from experience, weaving it into a prayer, a praise, a sermon:
Which one of you can love his foe,
and with that love stem taunting's flow.
His love He gives without regret,
because in Him love's shadow's set.
The rhymes support your core message but does not overwhelm it. I feel your gratitude and resilience during your trying days. I pray they get better. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Andre, for these most empathetic comments and sympathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from nomi338
Our common enemy Satan the devil, has certain tricks in his bag that he often uses.
#1 Make a person feel unloved, scorned and rejected.
#2. Cause a persoen to become provoked, anger brings out the worst in all of us.
#3, Fill us up with undo and unwarranted pride, which will soon be followed by a great fall. (Are you listening ploitical leaders?)
#4. Sexual imorality. Movies, television, advertising media, young females out on the street. We must wear blinders or make a covenant like Job in order to not see all of the shocking things on display in today's world.
I could name more, but I know you understand. God bless and keep you, my brother in Christ.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Our common enemy Satan the devil, has certain tricks in his bag that he often uses.
#1 Make a person feel unloved, scorned and rejected.
#2. Cause a persoen to become provoked, anger brings out the worst in all of us.
#3, Fill us up with undo and unwarranted pride, which will soon be followed by a great fall. (Are you listening ploitical leaders?)
#4. Sexual imorality. Movies, television, advertising media, young females out on the street. We must wear blinders or make a covenant like Job in order to not see all of the shocking things on display in today's world.
I could name more, but I know you understand. God bless and keep you, my brother in Christ.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you for these most potent comments and gracious review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a lovely spiritual verse. Well written, well rhymed.
I'm sorry to hear that you are going through a trying time.
Thank you for sharing this inspiration with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is a lovely spiritual verse. Well written, well rhymed.
I'm sorry to hear that you are going through a trying time.
Thank you for sharing this inspiration with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sharon, I'm OK dear friend, and thanks for these most beautiful comments and gracious review, blessings, Roy
