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God sees me as I am...

Without a mask.

60 total reviews 
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"God sees me as I am.......", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. To me, this is a definite six!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks dearest Duchie, for very supportive words and marvellous review, blessings, Roy
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 25-Feb-2018
    Roy, my possum, as always, you're very welcome.

    Best wishes, take care and bless you,
    a slowing unwilting Duchie
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
    You're a brick dear Duchess
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 26-Feb-2018


    Now, tell me something I don't know.........

    the Duchess xxooxx
Comment from pome lover
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Roy, I don't know what you mean by the past two days, or why you would be rejected, but you seem a good man - better than I if you forgive your enemies.
Also I don't get the line "this world will measure me by feet."
Your poem is expressive and sad and your belief in God is strong.
Bless you,
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thanks Katherine, for these encouraging words and a great review, to measure by feet, simply means measuring in secular terms. blessings, Roy
Comment from RGstar
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Once again your faith shines through. The love from parent to child is paramount, even if it not always the same the other way around, yet when it becomes of faith and the Lord, it is in equal balance for those who believe.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks My friend, for these wonderful words and supportive review, blessings, Roy
Comment from judiverse
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This is beautifully worded, and your AABB rhyme works perfectly. It's a wonderful thought to be loved for who you are. Nice comparison with the way parents see their children. The consider them perfect, regardless of imperfections. It seems that knowing you're loved by God makes you able to deal with mockery from others. As for loving your enemies, that's really difficult. A woman in my town, a Holocaust survivor, says that she forgives those who persecuted her. That is real forgiveness. judi

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks Judi, for these wonderful words and marvellous review, the suprem example of one's enenemis is Christ dying fo a world lost in sin, "While we were yet sinners, Christ Died for us" of blessings, Roy
Comment from Fabiha_N
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This is a beautiful poem!
Most people try so hard to cover themselves up and "wear a mask" from others around them, but only God can see past that.
Very well-written, and carries a deep meaning :)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks, for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, rejection is not in the cards for you, Roy, even in this secular world, especially because your heart and spirit is filled with the love and grace of the Master of us all - the poem addresses love, but also the foibles of humanity, in easy rhyme and casual rhythm. It appears as joy and humility in the writing...

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thanks Eve, for these encouraging words and such a gracious review, blessings, Roy
reply by evesayshi on 24-Feb-2018
    You are most welcome, Roy...Eve
Comment from Angela VA
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This is a great reminder for all who are in Christ. It is so very easy to listen to the voices of condemnation, whether they come from without or within. The "good" and "blood" rhyme was a bit of a stretch, but it still works. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thanks Angela,, for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Ulla
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Oh Roy, I'm so sorry that you've had a hard time. I certainly hope it's nothing serious. I'm so pleased for you that you find solace in your unwavering faith. It's such a beautiful poem you have composed expressing your deep belief. All the best.Ulla:))

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
    Thanks Again Ulla, for uplifting words and kind and and gracious, as long as God is with me, who can be against me. review, blessings, Roy
Comment from crzypnter
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Roy,
What a wonderful poem. We all have flaws and by no means am I perfect. But I'm blessed with the fact HE loves me in spite of my imperfections. Great message here friend. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks August, for these encouraging words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Sometimes we need a good reminder like this. I'm not perfect and I never will be but that's okay because I'm still loved just as I am by the only person that matters. Great job friend.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    Thanks dear friend , for your kind words and marvellous review, blessings, Roy