Coffins and nails
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Comment from LIJ Red
I think a reasonable, goodhumored neighbor or co-worker spreads a lot more goodwill than some sanctimonious canting parson, and a cheerful pair of parents do wonders with kids...excellent free verse.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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I think a reasonable, goodhumored neighbor or co-worker spreads a lot more goodwill than some sanctimonious canting parson, and a cheerful pair of parents do wonders with kids...excellent free verse.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you very much for your time and comments
Comment from tbacha58
WOW, i have been away for a few months, and reading your poem, made me realize how much i have missed during those months, but here I am reading a poem by a great writer, it moved me so much, that i had tears running down my cheeks. Beautiful, amazing, a written poem by a unique writer. Terry
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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WOW, i have been away for a few months, and reading your poem, made me realize how much i have missed during those months, but here I am reading a poem by a great writer, it moved me so much, that i had tears running down my cheeks. Beautiful, amazing, a written poem by a unique writer. Terry
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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You are very kind. Thank you very much for your vote of confidence in me. Nothing moves a writer more than knowing he/she
has stirred someone's emotions.
Comment from Katie Solis
That was a beautiful work. It reminds me of the glass half empty allegory; I love how you choose to waltz. It flowed very nicely, and I liked your imagery.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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That was a beautiful work. It reminds me of the glass half empty allegory; I love how you choose to waltz. It flowed very nicely, and I liked your imagery.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you for review and comments
Comment from Sherman541
The Perfect picture so colorful, vibrant, light and airy. I think it is not good for us to think of the coffin and nails, be not afraid of that or worried about that. Live here in the now and enjoy dancing, singing and life together, until we take our final bow. Beautifully written. Sherman541
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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The Perfect picture so colorful, vibrant, light and airy. I think it is not good for us to think of the coffin and nails, be not afraid of that or worried about that. Live here in the now and enjoy dancing, singing and life together, until we take our final bow. Beautifully written. Sherman541
Comment Written 28-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Loved your comments. Thank you.
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You are most welcome ;)
Comment from frogbook
A touch of poetic genius here my friend. Superb thoughts and phrasing. The stark title caught my attention but I like your idea of dancing along the way instead.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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A touch of poetic genius here my friend. Superb thoughts and phrasing. The stark title caught my attention but I like your idea of dancing along the way instead.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much. Your words were encouraging.
Comment from Linda Kay
You have such a talent for using imagery from nature to make a point about human nature. I especially love the hopeful ending inviting the reader to float away like a butterfly instead of being entombed with coffins and nails.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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You have such a talent for using imagery from nature to make a point about human nature. I especially love the hopeful ending inviting the reader to float away like a butterfly instead of being entombed with coffins and nails.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your kindness
Comment from samantha0930
It's hard for me to understand your poem, but maybe I'm just not seeing what the meaning is. I don't really think your picture relates to the poem at all. The only thing that connects them is your mention of butterflies in the last line.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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It's hard for me to understand your poem, but maybe I'm just not seeing what the meaning is. I don't really think your picture relates to the poem at all. The only thing that connects them is your mention of butterflies in the last line.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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The picture suggested to me we should see , speak , and hear beauty. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Harry Smith
The picture selection is outstanding and the poem has lots of imagery . I really enjoyed reading this poem and was able to relate to the writer. The poem flowed beautifully as well.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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The picture selection is outstanding and the poem has lots of imagery . I really enjoyed reading this poem and was able to relate to the writer. The poem flowed beautifully as well.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2018
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Rhythm and rhyme is what I strive for. Thank you ever so much for reading . Your joy is my happiness as well.
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You are most welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the way we live and walk in our living life. We kill others souls with harsh words and dirty looks more than people kill with guns and knives. Do we have an idea where our soul will go?
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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A very well-written poem about the way we live and walk in our living life. We kill others souls with harsh words and dirty looks more than people kill with guns and knives. Do we have an idea where our soul will go?
Comment Written 24-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2018
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As an emergency room nurse I have experienced first hand that verbal is the worst kind of child abuse and the hardest to prove. Many thanks for reading and commenting.
Comment from Mike Momba
i loved the choice of words especially words like heart search tendrils
hold stock of nothing of value
putridness and decay
espouse a monasterial life
i did not however easily see the flow
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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i loved the choice of words especially words like heart search tendrils
hold stock of nothing of value
putridness and decay
espouse a monasterial life
i did not however easily see the flow
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reading and your comments.
