Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

Oh, Harry, this expression of the moment of impact and results is so expressive in its imagery. It leaves this reader literally, physically sensing every moment. It's frightening.
Sorry I haven't been reading much lately and this is late coming to you.
PS) How's it going getting your book out?

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018

Thanks for the kind review. I am hopefully beginning my last rewrite; my goal is to self-publish by September 1, 2018. Thanks for asking.

reply by LaRosa on 28-Feb-2018

You're not forgotten...

reply by the author on 01-Mar-2018

Thank you, my dear.

Comment from apky

Excellent

I like the artwork which complements the story to the maximum.

Poor Jason. But he seems to have got away with some good points too! How many of us come away from accidents with a need to repress laughing?

>>Result was chest bruises, three broken ribs and the need to repress laughing for six weeks, plus a ticket for a red light violation.<<

Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from Mel E. Furnish

Good

"A need to repress laughing for six weeks"... oh goodness that makes me feel awful for drawing out a smile in me, but also feel for the fictional character. I love the end, how you listed the bad and then that and lastly, the final thing that left me with a "meh, oh yeah" impression: "plus a ticket..."! Very good!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thanks for the read.