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Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Scene at a Bee Farm"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
8 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
hahahaha, you do make me laugh out loud, Bill. I didn't know steam would get rid of the bees. Deear God, poor Ned must be terrified. You did great with his buzzing speach. I love it. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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hahahaha, you do make me laugh out loud, Bill. I didn't know steam would get rid of the bees. Deear God, poor Ned must be terrified. You did great with his buzzing speach. I love it. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 22-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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They actually use smoke, but that didn't fit my bit.
Comment from Spitfire
Ha,ha. Scary picture. Best line is the misunderstood 'saleing'. Is that true about taking bees off with steam? How would that work?
Great work with capturing the sounds of Ned's voice.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Ha,ha. Scary picture. Best line is the misunderstood 'saleing'. Is that true about taking bees off with steam? How would that work?
Great work with capturing the sounds of Ned's voice.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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I?ve seen them use smoke to move bees. Steam worked better for my skit.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and interesting adventure that Pons and Ned had at the bee farm. You used very cute wording, dialogue and the art work went well with your words. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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This is a very cute and interesting adventure that Pons and Ned had at the bee farm. You used very cute wording, dialogue and the art work went well with your words. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from pbomar1115
Ned has a way of getting into trouble. And his understanding of the situation he gets in does not cause any mental stress. He takes everything with ease.
Phillip
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Ned has a way of getting into trouble. And his understanding of the situation he gets in does not cause any mental stress. He takes everything with ease.
Phillip
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Ned is one with the Ned
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That's for sure.
Comment from nomi338
Poor Ned, who would have guessed that he would wind up being a Bee target. I guess he was sweeter than anybody else thought. With his tongue swollen like that, maybe he will start to make more sense. Naw, who am I kidding? His brain is not swollen, just his tongue.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Poor Ned, who would have guessed that he would wind up being a Bee target. I guess he was sweeter than anybody else thought. With his tongue swollen like that, maybe he will start to make more sense. Naw, who am I kidding? His brain is not swollen, just his tongue.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Ned will bee fine.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! I lovvvve it! Pons can understand Ned better with his mouth closed. LOL!
Ned: Hmmff-bzzzzzzz-mmm
Pons: Right. A bear petting zoo and a honey-covered pillow fight competition would likely double their sales.
This is super funny. What is a word for that? Funnilicious? Supercalifunnilistic? Anyway, I only have one six left for the rest of the week. You'd better not be brilliant again, since my policy is just one six per week per person. To make that more clear, Hmmff-bzzzzzzz-mmm.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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LOL! I lovvvve it! Pons can understand Ned better with his mouth closed. LOL!
Ned: Hmmff-bzzzzzzz-mmm
Pons: Right. A bear petting zoo and a honey-covered pillow fight competition would likely double their sales.
This is super funny. What is a word for that? Funnilicious? Supercalifunnilistic? Anyway, I only have one six left for the rest of the week. You'd better not be brilliant again, since my policy is just one six per week per person. To make that more clear, Hmmff-bzzzzzzz-mmm.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Wow! Thanks, Phyllis. You are very kind.
Comment from judiverse
It's a good thing that Pons can understand Ned. A garage sale sounds like a much safer, unless the bees follow him there. Very humorous, with the attempts to understand what's happening with Ned. A good thing there is a solution to get the bees away--the use of steam. Sounds like not much fun if the bees got Ned's tongue. He should have kept his mouth shut maybe. Very ingenious. judi
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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It's a good thing that Pons can understand Ned. A garage sale sounds like a much safer, unless the bees follow him there. Very humorous, with the attempts to understand what's happening with Ned. A good thing there is a solution to get the bees away--the use of steam. Sounds like not much fun if the bees got Ned's tongue. He should have kept his mouth shut maybe. Very ingenious. judi
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Well, perhaps Pons needs to become a dentist or dental hygienist as I don't know how anyone could understand anything that Ned said. Fun dialogue - or monologue?
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Lol. Well, perhaps Pons needs to become a dentist or dental hygienist as I don't know how anyone could understand anything that Ned said. Fun dialogue - or monologue?
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka
