Comment from ngage

Excellent

I must say Shana, this emotional chapter blew me away. Even though Sebastian is the bad guy, I have to admit, I kind of feel sorry for him after Eve took his sons and left him leaving only a note behind. You did a superb job creating those roller coaster of emotions.
Now that Eve, Mia, and the twins are safe, hopefully the Breedline will locate Tessa and Jace.
Super job!

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thank you, ngage :)
You just made my morning! So glad you enjoyed the emotional scenes. That is my favorite part to write. The battle scenes are the parts I really have to focus on. Stay tuned... more to come!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

Thing's appear to be on the move, and thanks to Arius, Eve, Miao and the twins Arius and Tidus have escaped from the place where they were held prisoner, however Jace is also being held and being experimented on to make many of him, but the breedline are planning to rescue them. Things are on the March dear Shana, , will they rescue, Jace? , Tessa, Lilith, the twins. Great week's episode dear Shana, wonderful writing. Well blessings, Riy

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thank you dear friend :)
It's beginning to look like a roller coaster for the Breedline. Many ups and downs. They have their hands full now that they have more to rescue. Stay tuned... the battle soon begins.
Always your fan,
Shana :)

reply by royowen on 21-Feb-2018

You're doing very well Dear Shana

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks how man takes indecision in a hurry being emotional and later lament for such action, nothing is so easy in life, as one sows so one reaps; what Eve has done with Sebastian; question before readers - is goodbye a relation so cheap; good progression of plot, nice climax and formal ending; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thank you Alcreator Litt Dear :)
Always enjoy hearing from you. There is a lot of emotions going on with the Breedline and they are preparing for a big battle. Hopefully they will be able to rescue their loved ones. Stay tuned... more to come! :)
Thanks again,
Shana :)

Comment from Kathy Allmon

Excellent

I would have given you six stars but I ran out of them for the week. There is so much of the plot going on at the same time. How do you keep track of everything. I am truly honored to review this. Good luck as the series goes on.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018

Thank you so much, Kathy :)
I do have a lot of characters and a roller coaster of adventures. This is my third book for the Breedline series and currently working on the fourth. My characters are almost family to me so it's easy to keep them all in line. At first I did have to keep a reference list. LOL!
Glad you enjoyed and you could easily follow the story. I hope to hear from you again. I love your positive energy!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

Comment from apky

Exceptional

Perfect! This time there wasn't a sing dot out of place. Bravo!

I'm now left on tenterhooks. Because i smell another major war coming up, and knowing how well you get your characters to conduct combat, I simply can't wait read about the next clash of the powerful and the powerful.

I'm so proud to be your friend, proud of your incredible talent, darling.

Hugs to your handsome boy.

Always fondly,
Aki

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you my talented friend! :)
We are thinking a like because I just gave you a review! Wow! That's so cool!
You blew me away with your awesome and encouraging words. Wow... this means a lot coming from such a talented author. You give me confidence that I lack many times.
You're the best! And its a privilege to be your friend.
Always your fan,
Shana :)
P.S. I will give my son Nathan a big hug for you this Sunday. We are celebrating his 29th birthday. That makes me feel old. :)

reply by apky on 20-Feb-2018

Why feel old when you're turning 29 all over again, Schatz? That young man is as much you as you are him...