Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Exceptional

Yvonne,
You did an awesome job with your challenge poem for potlatch. The rules were followed & you created a fun poem. The picture is perfect. You are right about the 'don't try this.' That has caused some accidents in the past when others do try what they see or read. Great job & thanks for sharing a 2 verse Harrisham rhyme. Both verses are done according to the rules. Your poem tells a great story. Jan

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Of course, I wouldn't dare try anything like this in case I blow up my house. Thank you for a most awesome review.

Comment from frierajac

Excellent

This is a very apt potlatch entry and as often is with damommy, humorous. So congrats on the formatting and the theme of making potions to rid ones own self
of 'the bug'. Does it work for the common cold?

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

I don't know. It ate through the countertop. LOL. Just joking. Thanks for a fun review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting and well written Harrisham Rhyme you penned for the club event. You used very good wording and imagery. Looks like you followed the rules! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

Thank you. I hope I did. It was harder than I thought.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Harrisham rhyming poem. We experimenting with many things we hear about. It does not always work out as well as we may thought and ended up in a mess.

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018

So true. I made this up, though. I'd be afraid to try anything in case I blew up the house. lol. Thanks for reviewing.