Soon, little one
A poem from grandma.8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem. The last few weeks before the little one is born we cannot wait for their appearance a d we start dreaming to hold them against our heart.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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A very well-written rhyming poem. The last few weeks before the little one is born we cannot wait for their appearance a d we start dreaming to hold them against our heart.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for the kind words. Yes! I can't wait to touch him and hold him close... I am looking forward to getting to know him. Thank you again!!
Comment from Ogden
You sly grandma. You do know how to tug at those heartstrings.
The innocent face of little Jayce, and all those disarming sentiments. Nice work.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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You sly grandma. You do know how to tug at those heartstrings.
The innocent face of little Jayce, and all those disarming sentiments. Nice work.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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That innocent little face gets me into a lot of trouble with his mommy and daddy. He has me wrapped around his little fingers, all of them, and he knows it!
Thank you so much for the review and taking the time to read my work. It is very much appreciated! :)
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You are very welcome, Bunny.
Don
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Bunny, This is an incredibly beautiful write about a precious time of life. I loved your rhymes and the feel of this one. There is some tough competition in this contest but you have a gorgeous piece of writing. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hi Bunny, This is an incredibly beautiful write about a precious time of life. I loved your rhymes and the feel of this one. There is some tough competition in this contest but you have a gorgeous piece of writing. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for the kind words and awesome review. I sure do appreciate it.. Have a wonderful day!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Rhyming Poetry writing prompt.
Well said, a lovely story in your verse.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is a good entry for the Rhyming Poetry writing prompt.
Well said, a lovely story in your verse.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much! I sure do appreciate the review and kind words. Thank you!!
Comment from Henry King
Review from Henry: You have a nice flowing verse with good rhythm and almost perfect rhyme pattern. The last verse, the last line a suggestion: So perfect for us to greet.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Review from Henry: You have a nice flowing verse with good rhythm and almost perfect rhyme pattern. The last verse, the last line a suggestion: So perfect for us to greet.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for the review and the suggestion. I sure appreciate you taking the time...
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Reply from Henry: Your welcome.
Comment from Kathy Allmon
This is so sweet. It sounds like you are just like my mom. You were great moms but you are awesome grandmas. Thank you for the photo. You can feel the love.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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This is so sweet. It sounds like you are just like my mom. You were great moms but you are awesome grandmas. Thank you for the photo. You can feel the love.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much!! Your review means the world to me!! I never thought I could love another child like I loved my own... then I became a grandma and that theory was blown out of the water. My grand-babies mean so much to me.
(Your mom sounds awesome!)
Thank you!!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I have discovered that Grandma's want as many grandchildren as they can get to spoil for a time and then to give them back. This is a sweet sounding and heartfelt little poem. I like it! Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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I have discovered that Grandma's want as many grandchildren as they can get to spoil for a time and then to give them back. This is a sweet sounding and heartfelt little poem. I like it! Well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much!! Yes, the spoiling is pretty awesome. But giving them back is sometimes kind of tough... :)
Comment from Susan Burger
This is an excellent entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest. I like the use of the same phrase, Soon little one, starting each line and your choice of words. This flows very nicely. Congratulations on your new little one! And good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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This is an excellent entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest. I like the use of the same phrase, Soon little one, starting each line and your choice of words. This flows very nicely. Congratulations on your new little one! And good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much!! I sure appreciate your review.
