Each Layered Cut
A poem49 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a lovely poem with rich descriptions throughout. You put many vivid images in my mind as I read. Just like people listening to a sermon at church, we all get something personal out of it that is unique just to us.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is a lovely poem with rich descriptions throughout. You put many vivid images in my mind as I read. Just like people listening to a sermon at church, we all get something personal out of it that is unique just to us.
Joy xx
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much Joy. tom
Comment from jdrhye
The tone and flow are good. I like the breaks inserted that gives the reader a moment to digest. There are many ways to interpret leaving much open for the reader to decipher. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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The tone and flow are good. I like the breaks inserted that gives the reader a moment to digest. There are many ways to interpret leaving much open for the reader to decipher. Nicely done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you jdrhye. Most honored. tom
Comment from dragonpoet
This abab philosophical poem seems to be about life and death. It seems to remind us to live life because it is fleeting. No matter how solid and strong it seems, you have to notice that their is fog around it.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This abab philosophical poem seems to be about life and death. It seems to remind us to live life because it is fleeting. No matter how solid and strong it seems, you have to notice that their is fog around it.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Very true Joan. I thank you very much my friend. tom
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Glad we agree. No problem, Tom
Joan
Comment from LIJ Red
And some, less lucky, feel each joint corroding, each faculty dulling, and see the reaper coming afar, and know that they are as mortal as flat roadkill. Looks kinda like an abab iambic pentameter. Exellent.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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And some, less lucky, feel each joint corroding, each faculty dulling, and see the reaper coming afar, and know that they are as mortal as flat roadkill. Looks kinda like an abab iambic pentameter. Exellent.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Hi Red. Thanks a million my friend. "mortal as flat roadkill". LOVE THAT LINE! Thank again. tom
Comment from crzypnter
This is a poignantly written poem with great rhythm and flow. A clever illusion on life how you take the reader down one road just to find out it was a complete different road. Thanks for sharing God bless
August
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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This is a poignantly written poem with great rhythm and flow. A clever illusion on life how you take the reader down one road just to find out it was a complete different road. Thanks for sharing God bless
August
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you my friend. tom
Comment from TPAC
A very profound write, traveling course filled many views to consider, thought-provoking concepts laid in precise realities. In my opinion of this work a good read.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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A very profound write, traveling course filled many views to consider, thought-provoking concepts laid in precise realities. In my opinion of this work a good read.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you once again TPAC. Most honored. tom
Comment from Ben Colder
Each layer cut is foul and spent. Very good stanza. Strong worded. I find no fault. All seems to flow well. No mistakes noticed. Thank you for sharing your write, poet.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Each layer cut is foul and spent. Very good stanza. Strong worded. I find no fault. All seems to flow well. No mistakes noticed. Thank you for sharing your write, poet.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Ben. tom
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a commanding write, expressively presented in easy rhyme and exacting rhythm - the message is defined and elegantly referenced euologically...
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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In my opinion, a commanding write, expressively presented in easy rhyme and exacting rhythm - the message is defined and elegantly referenced euologically...
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you my friend. tom
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You are very welcome, my gifted friend...Eve
Comment from Ashlie Daza
As I was reading your poem, I felt the emotion and the complexity of the message. Definitely a great piece. Artfully written, keep up the amazing work.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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As I was reading your poem, I felt the emotion and the complexity of the message. Definitely a great piece. Artfully written, keep up the amazing work.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Ashlie. Most honored my friend. tom
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You are quite welcome Tom.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about who we are and what is really important to us. We all have different dreams and preverances and each one is perfectly cut out for us and our specific needs and dreams.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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A very well-written poem about who we are and what is really important to us. We all have different dreams and preverances and each one is perfectly cut out for us and our specific needs and dreams.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2018
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Thank you Sandra. tom
