Each Layered Cut
A poem49 total reviews
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Absolutely great read! A lot of thought and purpose had to have gone into this intricately detailed poem. I can absolutely see why you won! Excellent job!
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Absolutely great read! A lot of thought and purpose had to have gone into this intricately detailed poem. I can absolutely see why you won! Excellent job!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I liked this poem for its solid rhyme and meter that ensured the flow and structure of the whole. This allowed the reader to concentrate on the message and become immersed in the imagery. Much enjoyed, kay
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I liked this poem for its solid rhyme and meter that ensured the flow and structure of the whole. This allowed the reader to concentrate on the message and become immersed in the imagery. Much enjoyed, kay
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
I may use up all my six stars on your writings. If you are not published you sure as heck should be. Very well written. A great rhyme and flow. I am still in that theater.
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I may use up all my six stars on your writings. If you are not published you sure as heck should be. Very well written. A great rhyme and flow. I am still in that theater.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You write such sincere poems. I sure am glad that you found your note pad so you would continue writing your wonderful poems. Another great poem that makes you think,
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You write such sincere poems. I sure am glad that you found your note pad so you would continue writing your wonderful poems. Another great poem that makes you think,
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I really like this stanza: All life is weaved with threads and smoke,
translucent its solidity;
life buried by illusion's yoke
in veils of vast transparency.
I thought it would work equally well as a first stanza.
My favorite line, though, was: so rich with rustic dust of red -
I could say that all day long, with its marvelous sense of sound and 'r' alliteration. I hope you get a chance to read this aloud somewhere!
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I really like this stanza: All life is weaved with threads and smoke,
translucent its solidity;
life buried by illusion's yoke
in veils of vast transparency.
I thought it would work equally well as a first stanza.
My favorite line, though, was: so rich with rustic dust of red -
I could say that all day long, with its marvelous sense of sound and 'r' alliteration. I hope you get a chance to read this aloud somewhere!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Another one of your wonderful poems that I enjoyed reading. Your poem is impressive and an excellent write. You used good imagery to guide the reader along. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
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Another one of your wonderful poems that I enjoyed reading. Your poem is impressive and an excellent write. You used good imagery to guide the reader along. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Ulla
Ee, this is another wonderful poem of your hand, and I can always trust that your thoughts go deep. And this is no exception. Thank you so much for sharing. Ulla:)))
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Ee, this is another wonderful poem of your hand, and I can always trust that your thoughts go deep. And this is no exception. Thank you so much for sharing. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
Comment from Raul1
The poem is impressive and tells a story right to the point. Writing it like this takes much hard work. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. I like it. Nice job! Thank you for sharing!
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The poem is impressive and tells a story right to the point. Writing it like this takes much hard work. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. I like it. Nice job! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
Comment from GWHARGIS
This beautiful poem about the journey of life hit me hard. I am one who sticks their head in the sand and pretends everything is good. I know deep down inside it isn't. This poem was like facing the thoughts and feelings I have pushed aside. Loved the stanza about youth when there was little history. Well written. If I had a six you would have had it. Gretchen
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This beautiful poem about the journey of life hit me hard. I am one who sticks their head in the sand and pretends everything is good. I know deep down inside it isn't. This poem was like facing the thoughts and feelings I have pushed aside. Loved the stanza about youth when there was little history. Well written. If I had a six you would have had it. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem about human existence. I enjoyed reading it. Good imagery to guide the reader along.
Your rhyming is excellent and doesn't feel forced. It flows well.
Gypsy
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Excellent poem about human existence. I enjoyed reading it. Good imagery to guide the reader along.
Your rhyming is excellent and doesn't feel forced. It flows well.
Gypsy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
