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a perfect science

earth's best kept science

6 total reviews 
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello there GodLucifer.

You know I've always had a healthy respect for your writing. This one is a little different than the other stuff you've written, but I think a certain amount of repletion acts almost like a meditative mantra. By the end of this fine piece I was definitely feeling what you were saying ... Nice work here! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    thank you for the time of day for your review,kiwi! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
Comment from Henry King
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Review by Henry: The poem is lyrical. The author seems to be shuffling anaphora poetic form and the spiral rhyme scheme of sestina together. The visual effect, an eddy in a maelstrom, is very good and it goes with the painting.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    thank you for the time of day for your review,henry king! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
reply by Henry King on 25-Feb-2018
    Your welcome
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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This is a very repetitive piece of work, my friend, but it works. As I do love science myself, lol. I do enjoy philosophical writing and words from the middle ages. Nice notes. Thanks for sharing. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    thank you for the time of day for your review,kerry! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a commentary about earth keeps science in term of time best but naturally, perceptually scientific; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    thank you for the time of day for your review,dr alcreator! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
Comment from Lucian Carter
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This is a really interesting structure. Bobbing and weaving in form and meaning. I think you captured your intentions perfectly. I envy your style. Great job.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    thank you for the time of day for your review,lucian carter! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer
Comment from Ricky1024
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"A Perfect Science"
It flowed well and read wellwith no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Dr Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 25-Feb-2018
    thank you for the time of day for your review,ricky1024! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

    your so vein
    godlucifer