Butterfly Kisses
A poem in ballad measure46 total reviews
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Tony Tony Tony... The delights you bring and the inspiration you find in your little granddaughter is astounding but oh so delightful. Inspirational. I just love your lines and the way you manipulated those butterflies on her dress. When I see those eyes I think Ah, no wonder! No wonder he is captivated. I think she has your heart in her hands, Smiles, Giddy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Tony Tony Tony... The delights you bring and the inspiration you find in your little granddaughter is astounding but oh so delightful. Inspirational. I just love your lines and the way you manipulated those butterflies on her dress. When I see those eyes I think Ah, no wonder! No wonder he is captivated. I think she has your heart in her hands, Smiles, Giddy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Giddy. I appreciate your lovely review and the six stars! Teagan has been quite an inspiration to me. It was lovely to have her here over Christmas. Blissfully quiet again now though! LOL
Comment from TAB_that's me
Oh, this is the sweetest little poem every of butterflies kisses. But, it is not just the butterflies kisses but how she flew them across the seas.
teresa
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Oh, this is the sweetest little poem every of butterflies kisses. But, it is not just the butterflies kisses but how she flew them across the seas.
teresa
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Teresa. I appreciate the review and your six stars! Only the other day she blew me another bunch of them over our FaceTime connection! I noticed that she was wearing her butterfly dress again!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I really like this. The butterfly kisses are the best, especially when babies are giving them. I love everything about this. It flows superbly and the artwork compliments your work. This poem is worthy of the awards it has received. Very well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I really like this. The butterfly kisses are the best, especially when babies are giving them. I love everything about this. It flows superbly and the artwork compliments your work. This poem is worthy of the awards it has received. Very well done.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Very many thanks, Jeffrey. I appreciate your review and kind words. All the best, Tony.
Comment from RGstar
SIX STARS
Just loved this, Tony. Just sad we didn't have more sixes. I saw the imagery unfolding in front of me, and oh, so lovely the feeling.
Magic should always be a part of a child's life, for it helps to bring back the age of innocence and wonder we once had.
Bravo. This one should be kept.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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SIX STARS
Just loved this, Tony. Just sad we didn't have more sixes. I saw the imagery unfolding in front of me, and oh, so lovely the feeling.
Magic should always be a part of a child's life, for it helps to bring back the age of innocence and wonder we once had.
Bravo. This one should be kept.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and comments, Roy. Appreciated.
Teagan and I had a lot of fun together! I'm gradually putting together of collection of poems of this kind to give to her when she's a little older.
All the best to you. I hope you'r keeping well. Tony
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Brilliant idea, Tony. That is all we have...love, time, and memories. Be well, my friend.
Comment from estory
A nice upbeat, whimsical poem of shared memories with your granddaughter. Plenty of color and uplifting butterflies, that connect you and get you to share emotions. Nice upbeat meter and musical rhyme scheme suit the theme estory
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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A nice upbeat, whimsical poem of shared memories with your granddaughter. Plenty of color and uplifting butterflies, that connect you and get you to share emotions. Nice upbeat meter and musical rhyme scheme suit the theme estory
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and comments. Appreciated. All the best, Tony
Comment from CD Richards
Great rhyme, impeccable meter, and a delightful theme. make this a lovely tale. I'd only heard of monarchs and cabbage whites, the others are new to me. Teagan is wonderfully photogenic - I can imagine the two of you having great fun playing butterfly games, and others. Well done with this excellent poem, Tony. Cheers, Craig
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Great rhyme, impeccable meter, and a delightful theme. make this a lovely tale. I'd only heard of monarchs and cabbage whites, the others are new to me. Teagan is wonderfully photogenic - I can imagine the two of you having great fun playing butterfly games, and others. Well done with this excellent poem, Tony. Cheers, Craig
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and comments, Craig. Appreciated. Yes, we had a lot of fun together! All the best, Tony
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a lovely verse of a grandfather and granddaughter bond through butterflies.
You have painted a beautiful picture here.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is a lovely verse of a grandfather and granddaughter bond through butterflies.
You have painted a beautiful picture here.
Well done and thank you for sharing this with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and comments, Sharon. Appreciated. Teagan and I had a lot of fun together! All the best, Tony
Comment from brenda bickers
Aww Tony,
this is so cute. I couldn't think of a better way than with butterflies to create a bond between granddaughter and grandpa. I love the picture, she is so cute. The poem was a delight to read.
Brenda:))X
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Aww Tony,
this is so cute. I couldn't think of a better way than with butterflies to create a bond between granddaughter and grandpa. I love the picture, she is so cute. The poem was a delight to read.
Brenda:))X
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and comments, Brenda. Appreciated. Teagan and I had a lot of fun together! All the best, Tony
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a wonderful read, Tony. The ballad meter is one of my favourites, and what a delightful picture to go along with a magical poem. It's nice to share butterflies especially when they're so beautiful.
Great job.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is a wonderful read, Tony. The ballad meter is one of my favourites, and what a delightful picture to go along with a magical poem. It's nice to share butterflies especially when they're so beautiful.
Great job.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and comments, Gloria. Appreciated. Teagan and I had a lot of fun together! All the best, Tony
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I'm assuming someone moved and that's why you're worlds apart? My brother and I are horrible people so when my sister had my nephews we taught them the aunt and uncle tax. Really, it's quite simple. When they get candy at a parade they have to give us some, not a lot, but a couple pieces. For Easter they have to give us a piece or two. I forget if it was me or him that came up with it, one of us started talking about the aunt and uncle tax and the other, me or him I can't remember, over heard it and jumped in running with the idea. A couple Easters they got light up rings. They have a little glow stick in them and it's actually kind of cool. The littlest one gave me him light up ring. I felt horrible for taking it but he refused and he told me that was what he wanted to give me as his tax payment, I told you we're horrible people but we usually only take chocolate or maybe a sucker. I still have that ring in my jewelry box. He's 5 now but he still asks about it every once in awhile and I show it to him. It's my special ring between us. Kind of like your butterflies :)
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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I'm assuming someone moved and that's why you're worlds apart? My brother and I are horrible people so when my sister had my nephews we taught them the aunt and uncle tax. Really, it's quite simple. When they get candy at a parade they have to give us some, not a lot, but a couple pieces. For Easter they have to give us a piece or two. I forget if it was me or him that came up with it, one of us started talking about the aunt and uncle tax and the other, me or him I can't remember, over heard it and jumped in running with the idea. A couple Easters they got light up rings. They have a little glow stick in them and it's actually kind of cool. The littlest one gave me him light up ring. I felt horrible for taking it but he refused and he told me that was what he wanted to give me as his tax payment, I told you we're horrible people but we usually only take chocolate or maybe a sucker. I still have that ring in my jewelry box. He's 5 now but he still asks about it every once in awhile and I show it to him. It's my special ring between us. Kind of like your butterflies :)
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Many thanks for your review and for sharing your personal anecdote. Appreciated. All the best, Tony
