Comment from jdrhye

Excellent

Dogs are histarical. I can totally picture them in my mind a hop a jump and then nose to nose. Happy yet unsure of what to do next. Cute and fun. Enjoyed the read made me laugh out loud!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the '1-6-1 Poetry' writing prompt.
A clear story in so few words.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is what dogs do and they say it's a dog's life, but from what I can see dogs have the best time ever! Good luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2018

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Looks like you worked from the blueprint of a one six one poem. And since I am a great fan of the canine species, I will declare this excellent, in my opinion.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2018

Comment from Katie Solis

Excellent

Cute, very light hearted. It reminds me of Dr. Sues, and I love Dr. Sues. Great job keeping within the confines of this contest. I appreciated the artwork you choose to go along with it.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I love your eight syllables. But, more than that, I love your title. I was a grabber. I was about to stop reviewing until I saw the title scroll across. Cute picture as well. When I spend hours on Fan Story, I feel like I am playing all day as well.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hah!
Loved it! Of course the chosen artwork does aid a bit, but I smiled as I read your /1/6/1 poem as I have a Golden Retriever "grandpuppy" who takes the word play to an entirely different dimension that I am accustomed to partaking!
Best wishes in the contest!

diane

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018