Glee
A bee happy place.11 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I liked this a lot. To write a short poem like this with any deeper meaning is very difficult to do, but you've managed just that. Well done. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Hi there, I liked this a lot. To write a short poem like this with any deeper meaning is very difficult to do, but you've managed just that. Well done. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks so. Ugh. Appreciate.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a lovely 1-6-1 syllable poem. You happened to pick my favorite flower--pink peonies. My grandmother used to raise them. You truly paint beautiful images here. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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What a lovely 1-6-1 syllable poem. You happened to pick my favorite flower--pink peonies. My grandmother used to raise them. You truly paint beautiful images here. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thank you. I love peonies and I can?t wait to see them bloom this Spring. I appreciate your good review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in your few well chosen words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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This is a good entry for the 1-6-1 Poetry writing prompt.
Well said in your few well chosen words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and comments. I appreciate it.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I think that this is true. Those bees are a sight to watch milling around pollinating all of the flowers. This sounds and looks like a good poem for the contest. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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I think that this is true. Those bees are a sight to watch milling around pollinating all of the flowers. This sounds and looks like a good poem for the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and comments. I appreciate the good review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Delightful!
What a perfect rendering for this 1/6/1 poetic prompt. Bees love peonies; that is for certain. And I express tremendous glee when I witness a bee taking part of any flower's deliciousness!
Well-crafted and Happy!!!!
Best Wishes,
diane
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Delightful!
What a perfect rendering for this 1/6/1 poetic prompt. Bees love peonies; that is for certain. And I express tremendous glee when I witness a bee taking part of any flower's deliciousness!
Well-crafted and Happy!!!!
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your thoughts and comments. I appreciate your good review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a pretty pink flowery write with wonderful honey bee in the centre of it spreading glee, perfect and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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This is a pretty pink flowery write with wonderful honey bee in the centre of it spreading glee, perfect and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the good review. It was fun to write and I love peonies. Regards. Melissa
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. All the bees will find great glee around the flowers in our gardens. Always make sure there is something the bees will enjoy.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. All the bees will find great glee around the flowers in our gardens. Always make sure there is something the bees will enjoy.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the great review and comments. I appreciate your efforts.
Comment from Sherman541
I don't have any sixes left, but this would be a six star to me. I love it, so simple but so complex and perfect. The picture is perfect too, reminds me of my back yard and spring, which I am missing so much. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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I don't have any sixes left, but this would be a six star to me. I love it, so simple but so complex and perfect. The picture is perfect too, reminds me of my back yard and spring, which I am missing so much. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for your comments and confidence. It is an encouragement to me to receive reviews such as yours. Thanks so much!
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You are very welcome - this poem is perfectly written for this contest - it is beautuiful - Again Good Luck!
Comment from Don Lee
Great job. It's harder to write shorter poems than long ones. You really have to put a lot of thought into finding the write ones that express what you want the reader to "hear" in your work.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Great job. It's harder to write shorter poems than long ones. You really have to put a lot of thought into finding the write ones that express what you want the reader to "hear" in your work.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the good review and comments. Regards!!
Comment from Susan Burger
Nice entry for the 1-6-1 contest. The picture you chose brings your poem to life. It reminds me of a Rose of Sharon bush I have that comes alive with bees buzzing in it. Nice job. Good luck in the competition!
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Nice entry for the 1-6-1 contest. The picture you chose brings your poem to life. It reminds me of a Rose of Sharon bush I have that comes alive with bees buzzing in it. Nice job. Good luck in the competition!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review and comments. I love peonies and can?t wait for them to bloom in spring. I had a Rose of Sharon at another home and they are very pretty - they are in the hibiscus family. (If you care to know. Lol). Thanks again.
