Who commands?
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sweet heartfelt write of cells joining to become a heart! Yes and then we know love in our hearts Roy, unity means everything, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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A sweet heartfelt write of cells joining to become a heart! Yes and then we know love in our hearts Roy, unity means everything, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank Dolly , for your marvelous comments and review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We can learn all we want in textbooks but we will never be able to copy or understand how God planned and keep everything together in our bodies and in good working order until we mess it up ourselves.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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A very well-written thought-provoking poem. We can learn all we want in textbooks but we will never be able to copy or understand how God planned and keep everything together in our bodies and in good working order until we mess it up ourselves.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks gain Sandra,, for your sage comments and supportive review, blessings, Roy
Comment from CC Mack
Very clever and your question, "Who commands" is intriguing. I like how you use the word command and the last line is actually a command, "Now become a heart"
Watch for my short story contest entry of 500 to 1000 words. It is of similar cellular lineage.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Very clever and your question, "Who commands" is intriguing. I like how you use the word command and the last line is actually a command, "Now become a heart"
Watch for my short story contest entry of 500 to 1000 words. It is of similar cellular lineage.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank CC, for your wonderful comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Kathy Allmon
Thank you Roy. You packed a lot of thought into 3 lines. That is why I am an organ donor(or will). You just never know what organ you have that could help others. Cant wait to read your next post.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you Roy. You packed a lot of thought into 3 lines. That is why I am an organ donor(or will). You just never know what organ you have that could help others. Cant wait to read your next post.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks Kathy, , for your super comments and empathetic review, and congratulations on your charitable heart, blessings, Roy
Comment from George Jr
Nice poem, leaving something for most to reflect on. Of course our creator designed us but how, scientifically does it happen? Thank you for the poem Roy.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Nice poem, leaving something for most to reflect on. Of course our creator designed us but how, scientifically does it happen? Thank you for the poem Roy.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank George, for your sage comments and great review, blessings, Roy
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Your welcome Roy. I think it's nice to get feedback on our work and worth what little time it takes ;-) Thank you for writing :-)
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Most welcome
Comment from Sasha
Great work with this. You do a terrific job conveying the important part God plays in who we are and what we become. Nice job getting me to think about this one. As always, I enjoyed this very much.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Great work with this. You do a terrific job conveying the important part God plays in who we are and what we become. Nice job getting me to think about this one. As always, I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank Sasha, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy
Comment from lyenochka
It is such a marvel, isn't it? Thanks for this good reminder that God does have all things under His control. Looking at the world, it doesn't look like it. But then there is so much we can't see like the individual cells. Great little poem, Roy!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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It is such a marvel, isn't it? Thanks for this good reminder that God does have all things under His control. Looking at the world, it doesn't look like it. But then there is so much we can't see like the individual cells. Great little poem, Roy!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks again Helen, , for your remarkably uplifting comments and review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Jean Lutz
I can truly appreciate this one. I am in a clinical trial and my cells are under a microscope literally. Thankful to be a participant in medical research that may provide hope to others. At the same time I know the Great Physician is listening to all the prayers and guiding hands of the doctors, nurses, pharmacy researchers. My heart knows the Who that commands.
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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I can truly appreciate this one. I am in a clinical trial and my cells are under a microscope literally. Thankful to be a participant in medical research that may provide hope to others. At the same time I know the Great Physician is listening to all the prayers and guiding hands of the doctors, nurses, pharmacy researchers. My heart knows the Who that commands.
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Here's hoping the Lord our healer heeds the prayers, bless you for the lovely review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Teri7
This is very well written Roy and very true. God is the creator of all things. You used very good descriptive words my friend! Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This is very well written Roy and very true. God is the creator of all things. You used very good descriptive words my friend! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thanks Teri, for you're wonderful comments and review, blessings, Roy
