Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Roy, before I got to the last line in your notes...that is what I was thinking...He puts them in their places...He holds them together...they are His creation...amazing our Lord...very well written my sweet friend...I love your poem...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018

Thanks so much dear Linda, you're a peach, lovely review, blessings, Roy

reply by l.raven on 20-Feb-2018

your so welcome sweetie...blessing to you as well...love xxoo

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

I enjoyed this one, Roy. I think they just do because of genetic sequence of the organism. It's why your heart is shaped the way it is and why your eyes are blue, but it's fascinating all the same.

Take care,
Russell

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Thanks Russell, for this most gracious review and super comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning, Roy
Enjoyed the poem and its message. You raise a good question. What in our evolution determined what cells become what. We could also apply this to humanity -- why do some groups hate, others love and others are ambivalent?

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Thanks Ray, for this most great review and super comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I am always amazed when people say "it just happens ". How can any intelligent person not realize that there has to be a master planner.
"Who Commands" brings that message home beautifully.

Well done Roy.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Thanks Janet,, for these great comments, and empathetic comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

An interesting short one. Yes, who's giving the orders? Did the cells just take it upon themselves to join together and become a heart. It is just one of the mysteries of nature, and there has to be some force behind all this creation. Starting with the question is a good device. Something to think about. Your syllable is right-on 5-7-5. judi

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Thanks Judi, for this great review and comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Cheers, Roy;
-if you your interesting concept and philosophical viewpoint of recognizing of which cells goes where and does what. How does it know? Does it have instinct? Is it possessed by a higher power, obviously.
-I really liked your presentation and composition, Roy, and thanks for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
PS: a very powerful point

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank Alex,, for your lovely comments and supportive review, blessings, Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

So true. Only God's hand can put things of the human body and of nature together to form such wonderful things that we can't even imagine. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks again Barbara, for these sage comments and great review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Roy;
I have always marveled at the way a human baby is made in the womb. We can see it go from cells into the human shape - but how do the cells know what they will grow into?

How can anyone see a baby come from an egg and a sperm and not believe in God? Every baby is a miracle,

~patty~

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

You've got it Patty, one has to ask, where did the single cell come from? I've never had a satisfactory answer, thanks dear Patty for this wonderful review. Blessings, Roy

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Like the artwork
And your poem
These things I can't answer
All I know is god created the body mind and soul and only He knows the simple answer
have a nice day
Cookie

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks so much Cookie for these superb words and stars, Roy

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

What a thoughtful poem. It is remarkable what you can do with a mere fourteen words. You are a masterful writer. Your words are always beautiful and thought provoking. Excellent job with this poem.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank Diebbie, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy