Comment from Katie Solis

Good

I liked your thoughts, and your examples of love. Very good reference to the Bible. While it was free verse, I thought the flow could go better. Good job with all of your expressions and sharing your beliefs. God Bless

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Hello Katie Solis: Thank you for using your time to review my poem. I appreciate your liking my examples of love. I just wrote what the Holy Spirit inspired me to write. He instructed me to share as I shared. I obeyed Him. As for the flow, I followed His flow.
As for the way I've laid it out; the poem was written in a simple way, so that our children can easily see it, in a format that is easy on young eyes. In my studies as a children's writer, I have learned that our children prefer to read writing that is easy and fun to read. By this type of writing, I can better hold their attention. Again, Katie. Thank you for your help. I needed it. rhonnie69.

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

My next book is of love poems so I knew when I saw the title I had to read it. The love you write about isn't necessarily a feeling but I do think that sometimes love is a feeling. After all there are a ton of different kinds of love. I'm also learning that while doing this book. You did a great job

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Hello ExperiencingLiphe: Thank you for reviewing my poem. Yes, you are right. There are a ton of different kinds of love.
But they all derive from the original source. That source is Agape love. Agape love is the love of our God. Yes. you're right.
love is sometimes feeling. Love is at all times feeling. But the feeling is created by Agape love. That's what I was trying to express. Understanding what you were trying to say to me, I edited my poem and rewrote it in a way that I hope will express your point of view. I liked it. I used it. Yours was a good point of view. Thank you. rhonnie69.

reply by ExperiencingLiphe on 18-Feb-2018

It looks great

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a What is Love writing Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr. Dr.Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018