Robert Plays In The Band
Third in the Robert's Adventures series8 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This poem touches my heart, as I have three daughter who all played in the band and they learned to play quite well. I always encouraged them in their music. Patricia
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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This poem touches my heart, as I have three daughter who all played in the band and they learned to play quite well. I always encouraged them in their music. Patricia
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018
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That's wonderful, what did they play? Two of my daughter's tried the violen and they learned a little but they lost interest. Thanks for reading and reviewing,
I really appreciate it.
Comment from Ogden
This children's poem has the ring of truth, so I suspect it isn't entirely fictitious, perhaps related in some familial way to the author. ?? :o)
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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This children's poem has the ring of truth, so I suspect it isn't entirely fictitious, perhaps related in some familial way to the author. ?? :o)
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking time to read and review. I have two boys of my own so I guess Robert is based on what I learned while raising them. I have a lot of fun writing about Robert, and I really appreciate your comments.
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It was a fun read, and a pleasure to write the review.
Comment from ScarletAffliction
Oh that life were this charming and simple! Oh that we could all be Robert and make it safely home to bed after a great day of supportive parenting and darling grandparents. This was a nice breath of fresh air from the difficult realities of ...well...reality. Thank you for the charming read!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Oh that life were this charming and simple! Oh that we could all be Robert and make it safely home to bed after a great day of supportive parenting and darling grandparents. This was a nice breath of fresh air from the difficult realities of ...well...reality. Thank you for the charming read!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for such a great review, I really appreciate you taking time to read.
Comment from Kathy Allmon
Wow, that took a lot of thought to craft that. That is a craft for sure. I love the artwork that you chose. Cant wait to read your next post. How long have you been writing?
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Wow, that took a lot of thought to craft that. That is a craft for sure. I love the artwork that you chose. Cant wait to read your next post. How long have you been writing?
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I've been writing poems such the age of eleven, but only just recently started writing children's poems. I have a lot of fun writing about Robert and I appreciate you taking time to read and review.
Comment from CC Mack
Robert Marcus Frederick Dune is a great name and perfect for a children's book. How creative! I like the repetition of the name also. I felt like I was singing a song instead of reading a poem.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Robert Marcus Frederick Dune is a great name and perfect for a children's book. How creative! I like the repetition of the name also. I felt like I was singing a song instead of reading a poem.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for such a nice review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from George Jr
Very happy fun children's rhyme. I've been reading a lot of them that have adult drama or real negative tones and words. It's refreshing to see a positive fun and witty children's poem geared for their enjoyment. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Very happy fun children's rhyme. I've been reading a lot of them that have adult drama or real negative tones and words. It's refreshing to see a positive fun and witty children's poem geared for their enjoyment. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem, I always appreciate hearing from fellow writers.
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Dido Boogie and thank you for a nice poem.
Comment from Teri7
This is another really cute limerick poem about Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune you have penned. You used such cute descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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This is another really cute limerick poem about Robert Marcus Fredrick Dune you have penned. You used such cute descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank you for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate your kind words.
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you are so welcome! Can't wait to read some more of those!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Loving these writes and Robert's adventures! Great rhymes and your stories should be put into a book with illustrations, they would sell well, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Loving these writes and Robert's adventures! Great rhymes and your stories should be put into a book with illustrations, they would sell well, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much! I would love to see these rhymes in book form...maybe some day. I really appreciate you taking time to read and review.
