cold dead hands
senryu8 total reviews
Comment from emptypage
Very good satire--and I was highly pleased to see it listed as such. I'm so tired of the so-called 2nd amendment "rights" that I want to slap whoever says anything about it. The ability to kill scores in one aim is not something that should ever be a right;.
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Very good satire--and I was highly pleased to see it listed as such. I'm so tired of the so-called 2nd amendment "rights" that I want to slap whoever says anything about it. The ability to kill scores in one aim is not something that should ever be a right;.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think that this is a good entry for the Political Senryu writing prompt.
Well done, well said, although it's a scary truth.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I think that this is a good entry for the Political Senryu writing prompt.
Well done, well said, although it's a scary truth.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
Comment from apky
It's possible that it is one of the many American dreams.
But when a dream consistently turns into a nightmare and one that harms
the weakest and most innocent and vulnerable of a society, the dreamer
needs to be woken up out of his or her nightmare...
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It's possible that it is one of the many American dreams.
But when a dream consistently turns into a nightmare and one that harms
the weakest and most innocent and vulnerable of a society, the dreamer
needs to be woken up out of his or her nightmare...
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
Comment from frierajac
This is an apt statement for today. It makes us take count of our ideas rather than get us going on the action, although it could in some sense try to have us pay more attention as to the why and when of the defensive stand we have taken .
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This is an apt statement for today. It makes us take count of our ideas rather than get us going on the action, although it could in some sense try to have us pay more attention as to the why and when of the defensive stand we have taken .
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
Comment from Sherman541
So sad ! So true! But why? This is a very political and very current topic. Straight and to the point. Perfect picture to portray the poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
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So sad ! So true! But why? This is a very political and very current topic. Straight and to the point. Perfect picture to portray the poem. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541
Comment Written 16-Feb-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is harsh reality, the cold hard rule of the gun which is steeped in American history and to tear it down you're gonna need another gun, best of luck, love Dolly x
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This is harsh reality, the cold hard rule of the gun which is steeped in American history and to tear it down you're gonna need another gun, best of luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from Debbie Pope
I love, love, love this political Senryu. It is so appropriate, even more today than usual. I know that you did not have long to compose it. This is a perfect entry. Good luck in the competition.
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I love, love, love this political Senryu. It is so appropriate, even more today than usual. I know that you did not have long to compose it. This is a perfect entry. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from rspoet
Sadly, I doubt the powerful special interest groups
will ever allow common sense to prevail.
Excellent topic in light of recent events
A 5-7-5 poem that should hang in the halls of government
Good luck in the contest
RS
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Sadly, I doubt the powerful special interest groups
will ever allow common sense to prevail.
Excellent topic in light of recent events
A 5-7-5 poem that should hang in the halls of government
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
