Comment from Kory James

Excellent

Great images and application of the quote. I like the idea that dreams are won not made and that time and dreams are both confined things that need to be opened in order to use. Great job!

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thanks Kory, for these great comments and super review, blessings, Roy

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Oh so true "time's contained in clocks", funny how time flies and yet it is contained. Some days seems, as though hours have past, when looking at the clock, it has only been five minutes, maybe ten. Dreams are the best, they can be, ever so slow or fast forward. Dreams are hopeful, they can lead us or leave us questioning. Very magical poem about dreams, Roy. Sherman541

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thanks Sarah, for these delightful comments and super review, blessings, Roy

reply by Sherman541 on 15-Feb-2018

you are very welcome. Blessing to you also, Sarah

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Hi Roy I like this well-written t-shirts and semen imagery that flowed well read well with no grammar issues as well just give to measure for firmly in place with this piece and it ejective an object the contents will gracefully placed an excellent thanks for this and Happy Valentine's Day dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks Ricky, for these great comments and super review, blessings, Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for illuminating your 5/7/5 with this one. It clarifies the act of faith that plays the part in giving substance and action to our dreams the ones that God urges us to act upon on.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks Helen, I didn't realise I'd written this a week or so ago, but it puts things in order, thanks Helen I appreciate your faithfulness.blessings, Roy

Comment from Fabiha_N

Exceptional

This is a beautiful poem and I think it conveys a very important message to all of us. A dream will merely stay a dream unless we work hard to make it a reality. Striving to reach your goals and never giving up will give our life purpose and meaning. We can all reach this stage if we have faith for ourselves :)

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks som for these outstanding comments, review and magnificent stars, blessings, Roy

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Roy, This is a very nicely written poem to follow up with your 5-7-5 poem about If Dreams. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Great scripture you used. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks Teri, for these super comments and review, blessings, Roy

reply by Teri7 on 14-Feb-2018

you are so welcome my friend! Hope you and Elaine have had or having a great Valentines! Blessings, Teri

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

We did, and did you and Tom dear Teri?

Comment from ramzo

Excellent

Wow, this is a lovely piece you got here. I enjoyed reading this all the way to the end.
Very will put analogies here and there and the motivation to keep the dreams alive despite of time.

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks for these marvellous comments and review, blessings, Roy