Comment from Ashlie Daza

Excellent

A.beautifully written poem about dreams. The words flow into lines that intertwine with each other. The message and meaning are deep yet everybody can relate to it. It's simply a work of art, a masterpiece. Great job Royowen.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Thanks Ashlie, for this most gracious review and super comments, blessings, Roy

reply by Ashlie Daza on 18-Feb-2018

You are very welcome Roy.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Another beautiful poem Roy with an excellent message and great imagery. Perfect scripture to compliment your spiritual wisdom you so generously share.

Well done my friend.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2018

Thanks again Janet, for this marvellous review and lovely comments, blessings, Roy

Comment from Susan Burger

Excellent

Very nice. I like the picture you chose and the quote from Colin Powell. This goes a long nicely with your work. Your poem flows nicely and I especially like your last stanza. We do have to seize those dreams. Good work thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank Susan, for your great comments and gracious review, blessings, Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

God does answer prayers, but I think we need to do our part. It's like if we pray for rain, then we should take an umbrella. If we don't it's like we don't expect it to rain. I hope I'm making sense. I enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank Barbara, for your great comments and gracious review, blessings, Roy

Comment from crzypnter

Excellent

Roy,
Another wonderfully written poem. I like how you tied in the scripture without missing a beat. Great imagery with even flow. Another poignant faith poem that you do so well. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks again August, for your great comments and gracious review, you're a great filip for me. blessings, Roy

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Good job. I liked the phrase "cause time's contained in clocks". It's so true that time is only a measurement and that eternity's existence isn't confined by time... it just is. Thanks for a great poem.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thanks, for these great comments and review, blessings, Roy

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Roy, another lovely poem with wonderful description, imagery and alliteration. It rhymes and flows beautifully. Time surely is contained within clocks!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank Mel, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy

reply by MelB on 17-Feb-2018

You're welcome. Lord Bless.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

An excellent dream tree that complements your poem perfectly. Don't worry you posted them the wrong way around. Don't let the dream escape, cause time's is contained in clocks. A great poem you created.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank Ine, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a lovely piece of poetry dear Roy! I love the imagery and your sentiment of dreams. You have written it with so much elegance and finesse.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018

Thank Dear Rebekka, for your super comments and empathetic review, blessings, Roy

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Though most of us will miss that mark,
we hear a distant voice;
while thinking it's the zephyr's sound,
we never make faith's choice.

A beautifully penned poem, my friend. I especially like this stanza. Have a blessed day~Debbie

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks dear Debbie, your a wonderful support for me, bless you, Roy,