Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think that this is a good entry for the Valintine's Poetry writing prompt.
Well done, with a twist on the usual message.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks Sharon

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written heartfelt and sad poem. Sometimes we need someone out of out physical life, but they remain in our hearts and on our minds all the time. We can only hope we will be on their minds as well.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thanks Sandra. Take care. Jen x

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Good poem for the competition. Is this syllable based? I wish you all the luck in the competition.
Have a spectacular day and rest of the week and weekend. :D

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Thank you. It is acrostic. If you look down the left hand side it spells Valentines Day. Cheers jen

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is Valentine's poetry rhyme and contests aren't you is very well written I like the pictures with it and they were very nice with it and it was easy to read and I'll grammar issues descriptive measures work perfect with this as well as adjectives an object of contents good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024 and Happy Valentine's Day

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

So sad and yet a hopeful very compassionate piece. Nicely done and to the point.

'So many memories, I love you so much. ' Still the love is there

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Many thanks

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Wonderful conveyance, tender thoughts prevailing views of love, a wanting heart missing of a mate. Them rejoined to fulfill each happiness. All in my opinion of this write.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Many thanks

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Ah, this is sad and sweet both. I am sorry you lost your love, your valentine. They will forever be with you though.

Great acrostic form. Good luck in the contest.

teresa

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thank you

Comment from joycetreasures

Good

This is a sweet poem of a yearning love. I like how it flowed. Once a love is gone you always have memories, good or bad. I love the title of this poem. Loneliness for love is very sad. Good job.

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 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks

Comment from The kurlman

Excellent

A lovely use of words. I enjoyed reading this poem
I also liked how you went from a one word line to multible words.
Since I have almost no expierence with this, I did noticed some lines rhymed while others did not. The kurlman

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

What a sad Valentine. I won't even watch movies where the lovers have to part. But back to your poem, I find it poignant and well done. So many love stories are just memories. You captured that well.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018

Thanks for your comments. Much appreciated.