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The Life of Mrs. Armstrong

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Comment from lyenochka
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Wow, you were teaching not only in class but teaching excellent skills at home, cooking, meal planning and wise choices for health and economical, too! I smiled at the relief for the ear buds when Andrea was listening to her music! Lol.
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Her uncle did not have too much today during the time he was home. (today? or to say?)
Did you check on the rolls, I could smell them rising?
Maybe make it into two sentences:
Did you check on the rolls? I could smell them rising.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
    Thank you so much Helene for reviewing and your fantastic comments-I guess just a little bit of everything. I will fix those suggestions in a moment. Hugs n smiles!
Comment from Pantygynt
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As a fellow advocate of slow cookers I loved this. A few weeks ago I pot roasted a leg of lamb in my slow cooker. It was delicious. It was also intriguing to read of you ancestors' answer to the slow cooker -- the fire pit. This was a highly domesticated episode and very interesting to read. Yes those ear bud earphones are a great blessing when the young are around.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
    Thanks for reviewing, I am glad you enjoy your slow cooker and the lamb sounds delicious. It is a treat for us here, usually double the price of beef. I thought that since she had offered to teach Andrea about cooking it was a good time. And I agree ear buds are indeed a blessing. Again thanks.
reply by Pantygynt on 14-Feb-2018
    Much the same here, a treat but I felt like experimenting and I have always cooked lamb slowly but this was something else again.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
    Yummy, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Ricky1024
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A successful visit was very well written I like this as I read into a deeper I noticed there was no grammar issue so to speak the objective content was perfect ejecta ponton lined up perfectly also the object of contents demon imagery or appropriate also thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024 well done

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
    Thank you for reviewing and for your comments.