Where Old Bones Lie
Just a bit of fun, no offence intended : )13 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the people in the grave, remembers in appreciation and retelling of their nature, type and relation; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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This speaks about the people in the grave, remembers in appreciation and retelling of their nature, type and relation; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review and encouragement. Much appreciated : )
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a rhyming contest home entry prompt Merchant Seaman imagery called old bones it was filled with wonderful and imaginative stories of course made up but well done here of different particular instances and different reasons why these people passed away of course beneath the ground it's always dark in these people are going to Forever punch the ticket that they did wrong when they embarked so now they lie no reason still but some people realize and did their ill will!
Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024 and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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This is a rhyming contest home entry prompt Merchant Seaman imagery called old bones it was filled with wonderful and imaginative stories of course made up but well done here of different particular instances and different reasons why these people passed away of course beneath the ground it's always dark in these people are going to Forever punch the ticket that they did wrong when they embarked so now they lie no reason still but some people realize and did their ill will!
Thanks for this.
Doctor Ricky 1024 and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your kind review and the amazing rating. Your words are truly encouraging, many thanks : )
Comment from Debbie Pope
I dearly love this poem. When I am traveling in the early morning, as lights begin to turn on in houses, I fantasize about the lives of these morning risers. I adore the thought of you doing this in a graveyard. And the people that you invent!!! Your poem is a true delight.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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I dearly love this poem. When I am traveling in the early morning, as lights begin to turn on in houses, I fantasize about the lives of these morning risers. I adore the thought of you doing this in a graveyard. And the people that you invent!!! Your poem is a true delight.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Always had a wild imagination : D
Thank you so much for your kind words, review and rating. All very much appreciated : )
