Bone orchard
Bitter summer love remembered.16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is some pain riddled in these lines, regret and sadness too. Sometimes our memories haunt us, a well written free write, very expressive, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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There is some pain riddled in these lines, regret and sadness too. Sometimes our memories haunt us, a well written free write, very expressive, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you. Life is so full of scabs and scars but definitely worth living.
Comment from royowen
I really enjoyed this rather esoteric piece, but I enjoyed the pace and enigmatic frame work, I'm usually better at interpreting these in the morning, but a simply in joyed the language, I'm open but in this case no conclusions, just well written and fascinating, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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I really enjoyed this rather esoteric piece, but I enjoyed the pace and enigmatic frame work, I'm usually better at interpreting these in the morning, but a simply in joyed the language, I'm open but in this case no conclusions, just well written and fascinating, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you. Words flow. The magic is in the water.
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Well done
Comment from dragonpoet
This free verse seems to be about the circle of life and love. It seems the speaker is reminiscing about these things using the seasons as metaphors. And is wondering how he/she will be remembered when dead.
Happy Valentine's Day
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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This free verse seems to be about the circle of life and love. It seems the speaker is reminiscing about these things using the seasons as metaphors. And is wondering how he/she will be remembered when dead.
Happy Valentine's Day
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the valentine. I hope my writing always has heart.
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You're welcome. I hope the same for mine.
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Comment from Trudi Perkins
This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem with us. Thanks again.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem with us. Thanks again.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Giving reader's pleasure is my greatest reward. Thank you for your sympathetic and kind review.I'll never hoist a white one
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The work reminisces the vagaries and indulgences of the seasons and what they hold for the physical and human environment.
The work highlights how the bones of winter deny the environment of fruits and how that of spring brings cherries and honey with it. Just as summer dismembers trees and comes with green corn.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphors, rhetorics, similes and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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The work reminisces the vagaries and indulgences of the seasons and what they hold for the physical and human environment.
The work highlights how the bones of winter deny the environment of fruits and how that of spring brings cherries and honey with it. Just as summer dismembers trees and comes with green corn.
The work earns its texture through the use of metaphors, rhetorics, similes and alliteration.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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All never hoist a white one. Keep charging yourself and thank you.
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Keep on flourishing!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks bitter-sweet remembrance of love in bitter summer; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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This speaks bitter-sweet remembrance of love in bitter summer; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Thanks for reading and your kind and gentle appraisal.
