Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the differences in meaning and appreciation between grownup and grown up; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, MOVE CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate it.

Comment from Sherman541

Excellent

Funny how they start and grow into such creatures. They are barely visible when born. In a sense they are barely visible grown up, unless you spend a lot of time in grass, down by the river beds. Very fun and lovely little poem about frogs. Sherman541

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thank you. I appreciate your review.

reply by Sherman541 on 13-Feb-2018

you are most welcome :)

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Very well done. I like the analogy to humans (toddlers). Who does like a frog? THey're so cute. I had a green one in my pool one spring. He left, but not before I took his photo. :)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

I have oodles of tadpoles in my fish pond every year. One grew up and has the deepest voice. Unfortunately, something usually gets all of the babies before they're frogs. Thank you.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

There is everything to enjoy about your poetic offering. The progression from polliwog to frog is filled with excellent descriptive adjectives! Smiles all around!
Diane

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thank you so much. I'm glad it made you smile.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Polliwogs, set up in a format I know, but can't recall its name, takes us wiggling and swimming, croaking and hopping from polliwog to frog. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

Thank you. It's a Diamante poem. I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

We used to catch them when we were kids...
And keep them until they were frogs, then we'd
have to let them loose in the nearby creek... Fastinating stuff for a little kid!...
Great little poem... Well Done!



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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

I usually have seemingly millions in my fish pond.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It is such an amazing transformation from "polliwog" (so fun to say!) to frog. I like how you used the form to show us the different types of motions involved from the opposite stages of a frog. I always wish I could grow them and witness the stages firsthand but never got a tadpole to grow.

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 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018

I usually have seemingly millions in my fish pond. Thank you for reviewing.