Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Yeah, and those of us who will NEVER fall in love again can breathe the biggest sigh of relief of all on Valentine's Day and Sweetest Day, Frank.
Who needs love when you can have friends with benefits?
Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Friend with benefits sounds nice. lol

reply by Dean Kuch on 17-Feb-2018

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
An interesting way to look at the holiday of St. Valentines. Yes, love is a minefield, and there are those who look over at the other pastures, but the man who tends to his field is the happiest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Getting back into fray after 30 years. Ex found greener pastures. Seeing some nice pastures but can?t figured out how to get through the fences yet. lol

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think that this is a good entry for the Valintine's Poetry writing prompt.
Well done, an interesting verse.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2018

Thanks!!

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written with great theme and imagery.
As this is a Valentine's contest entry was rich and semen imagery in there was no grammar issues good luck with this talk to Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

You know me well on grammar issues as I know not grammar. Appreciate your comments

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Loved every word, a great write and I wish I had a six for you, a very different Valentines write, yes my friend many stray to the greener grass and find it wasn't that green after all, I wish you luck with your poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018

Hi Dolly - thank you very much!