The Year Was Nineteen-forty-six
Unfortunately, the rules prevent showing his infamous image.28 total reviews
Comment from GLOBALEYES
History within these boundaries tell a tale of woe and catches your attention using the contrast of birth. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Betty Davis
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History within these boundaries tell a tale of woe and catches your attention using the contrast of birth. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Betty Davis
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Hundreds of thousands of children were born in the US in 1946 as that was basically the start of the post war Baby Boom. So I don't know exactly who you mean, but the birth of this individual whoever it might be, is really not unique, right? George W. Bush, Dolly Parton, Ted Bundy, Donald Trump, Cher among many others were born that year. *sigh*
Excellent job with your monostitch and too bad you couldn't show the image.
Best wishes to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
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Hundreds of thousands of children were born in the US in 1946 as that was basically the start of the post war Baby Boom. So I don't know exactly who you mean, but the birth of this individual whoever it might be, is really not unique, right? George W. Bush, Dolly Parton, Ted Bundy, Donald Trump, Cher among many others were born that year. *sigh*
Excellent job with your monostitch and too bad you couldn't show the image.
Best wishes to you in the contest. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from Wetbelly01
This says a LOT in so few words!... And so true...
My compliments your piece seems to fit the prompt
just fine... don't see any problems with it...
Well Done as far as I'm concerned!
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This says a LOT in so few words!... And so true...
My compliments your piece seems to fit the prompt
just fine... don't see any problems with it...
Well Done as far as I'm concerned!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is a very well composed Monostitch entry, Anonymous Poet.
Anyone reading this should be able to tell that a lot of thought went into creating it.
The message it conveys in so few words couldn't be more true.
Nicely done. Good luck to you in the contest.
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This is a very well composed Monostitch entry, Anonymous Poet.
Anyone reading this should be able to tell that a lot of thought went into creating it.
The message it conveys in so few words couldn't be more true.
Nicely done. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from ameen786
If it's June 14, I am with you my friend and I sure hope his days are numbered; can't wait to see the outcome of Mueller's investigation; good luck!
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If it's June 14, I am with you my friend and I sure hope his days are numbered; can't wait to see the outcome of Mueller's investigation; good luck!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from Pantygynt
The rules state this should be a ten syllable single line poem. The syllable count is correct but both my PC and tablet viewed in landscape present this on two lines. I would suggest that, if you wrote this on a single line you reduce the font size so there can be no doubr of your intention.
I like the way this monostitch includes internal rhyme -- scorn/born. I thought I knew who this was check it out on the net and found I was right. But not all the world would agree with you or me.
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The rules state this should be a ten syllable single line poem. The syllable count is correct but both my PC and tablet viewed in landscape present this on two lines. I would suggest that, if you wrote this on a single line you reduce the font size so there can be no doubr of your intention.
I like the way this monostitch includes internal rhyme -- scorn/born. I thought I knew who this was check it out on the net and found I was right. But not all the world would agree with you or me.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think that this is a good entry for the Impossible Dream Monostich writing prompt.
Well done, well said.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
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I think that this is a good entry for the Impossible Dream Monostich writing prompt.
Well done, well said.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from Rasmine
Is this about Hitler? Or Stalin, or Trump, or Putin, or Kim, or any killer. Could be about anyone that hurts others.
I wish you luck in the contest. :)
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Is this about Hitler? Or Stalin, or Trump, or Putin, or Kim, or any killer. Could be about anyone that hurts others.
I wish you luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
Comment from krys123
Cheers Contestant;
-now you got me thinking who was born in 1946 it really did hamper on our society or world.
-I know 1946 a was a 45 Hitler was killed was it Pinochet, no, who could it be?
-I have to follow this up but you got me going to where I cast my vote for you.
-Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one.
Alex
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Cheers Contestant;
-now you got me thinking who was born in 1946 it really did hamper on our society or world.
-I know 1946 a was a 45 Hitler was killed was it Pinochet, no, who could it be?
-I have to follow this up but you got me going to where I cast my vote for you.
-Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
Comment from TPAC
Wow. You definitely applied to the request, giving a brilliant defining by stated conveyance. I found this write truthful, profound in given reasoning. All in my opinion.
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Wow. You definitely applied to the request, giving a brilliant defining by stated conveyance. I found this write truthful, profound in given reasoning. All in my opinion.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
